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Array ( [sid] => 174358 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hello Heart [time] => 2012-11-22 05:37:08 [hometext] => the heart is what matters [bodytext] => heart can you hear me
I need to talk to you
I know it's very difficult
with what your going threw

your world has fell apart
you just want to go to sleep
but sadly when you wake up
all you do is weap

you've lost your only will
you're major part of life
there's no brighter days anymore
with out your children & your wife

you've locked yourself away
not knowing what to do
without the love that gives you life
your happy days are threw

we dont know how to fix this
the tears wont seem to dry
please dont ask me for an answer
I cannot tell you why

the closest I can say
it's what our dreams are all made of
the only way to stop the hurt
is to be reunited with our love

Roy Randolph Andrews AKA(thehotshotpoet) [comments] => 2 [counter] => 88 [topic] => 22 [informant] => thehotshotpoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Hello Heart

Contributed by thehotshotpoet on Thursday, 22nd November 2012 @ 05:37:08 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

heart can you hear me
I need to talk to you
I know it's very difficult
with what your going threw

your world has fell apart
you just want to go to sleep
but sadly when you wake up
all you do is weap

you've lost your only will
you're major part of life
there's no brighter days anymore
with out your children & your wife

you've locked yourself away
not knowing what to do
without the love that gives you life
your happy days are threw

we dont know how to fix this
the tears wont seem to dry
please dont ask me for an answer
I cannot tell you why

the closest I can say
it's what our dreams are all made of
the only way to stop the hurt
is to be reunited with our love

Roy Randolph Andrews AKA(thehotshotpoet)

Copyright © thehotshotpoet ... [ 2012-11-22 05:37:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Hello Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 22nd November 2012 @ 07:56:26 AM AEST
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NOW YOU ARE SHOWING, NOT TELLING.
Hang tuff, you have IT GOING ON NOW.
huggs, blessings, heart,
smiles,
emy

Re: Hello Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by desire on Thursday, 29th November 2012 @ 06:04:09 PM AEST
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This is so heartfelt and beautiful. You never cease to
Amaze me. Kudos my friend, beautifully done. I have to say I love it

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