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Array ( [sid] => 174353 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Helping the Heart [time] => 2012-11-21 06:50:16 [hometext] => what can we do when we know we were so wrong?we admit it !! [bodytext] => my heart will not forgive me
for forgetting to really show
just how much I love her
what she needed to know

if I could turn back time
for just a little while
back to when it wasnt hard
just to see a smile

my heart engulfed with pain
with nothing left to hide
is this how you feel
when your dying inside

my mind keeps pushing words out
I deserve what I'm going threw
without her in my arms
I have a lifetime of blue

the only woman in my life
to say I love you
I could feel it in my heart
& I knew it was true

if there is a god in heaven
let my words be known
I will turn my life around
if I could bring her home

be the husband that she thought she had
so very long ago
doing the oddest things
so she would always know

she's every woman in the world to me
& she will be all my life
let the whole world know I'm honored
that she is my wife

please give us a chance
I sware I'll make it right
you'll never have to wonder
if I'm gonna hold you tight

I love my wife & children
hopefully these words will show it
they are the life of Inspiration
in the hot shot poet

sincerely
Roy Randolph Andrews AKA(thehotshotpoet)
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Helping the Heart

Contributed by thehotshotpoet on Wednesday, 21st November 2012 @ 06:50:16 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



my heart will not forgive me
for forgetting to really show
just how much I love her
what she needed to know

if I could turn back time
for just a little while
back to when it wasnt hard
just to see a smile

my heart engulfed with pain
with nothing left to hide
is this how you feel
when your dying inside

my mind keeps pushing words out
I deserve what I'm going threw
without her in my arms
I have a lifetime of blue

the only woman in my life
to say I love you
I could feel it in my heart
& I knew it was true

if there is a god in heaven
let my words be known
I will turn my life around
if I could bring her home

be the husband that she thought she had
so very long ago
doing the oddest things
so she would always know

she's every woman in the world to me
& she will be all my life
let the whole world know I'm honored
that she is my wife

please give us a chance
I sware I'll make it right
you'll never have to wonder
if I'm gonna hold you tight

I love my wife & children
hopefully these words will show it
they are the life of Inspiration
in the hot shot poet

sincerely
Roy Randolph Andrews AKA(thehotshotpoet)




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Re: Helping the Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 22nd November 2012 @ 02:50:31 AM AEST
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This a very good write but my thoughts about the write and as a women, You need to show her. Forgive yourself as God forgives you already. Once you have done that then you want have to ask as she can read you hear you heart.
you need to do this for yourself as well as her and your kids.
Hang tuff, big blessings, prayer,
emy




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