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Array ( [sid] => 174349 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => F me [time] => 2012-11-20 17:07:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I feel inspired, I am talentless, I have nothing left to give, I feel depleted, empty, I have no more days to live, I am angry, furious , I hate everything that I ever did, I am lost, I am not confused, I know exactly why I deserve this !

I was happy, I felt privileged, living my little lie, I was blind, I was selfish , secretly wishing inside to die,

I made friends , I went to parties , I put on a happy face , I went home, I cried, I never wondered how I became such a disgrace,

God hates me, he despises me, he gave me love just to take it away, he gave me family , childhood memories , innocence like the night steals the day,

A monster scared me, a terror shook me, I knew I would never be the same, a thief stole from me, a world abandoned me , now I must go on knowing no one else is to blame,

Have mercy, show compassion, don't we all make mistakes? cast dispersions, jump to conclusions, you don't know me or what it takes, continue, to believe , that someday it might all be okay, I can't wait, I am cursed , I am simply just rotting away,

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F me

Contributed by Jyssvw22 on Tuesday, 20th November 2012 @ 05:07:05 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I feel inspired, I am talentless, I have nothing left to give, I feel depleted, empty, I have no more days to live, I am angry, furious , I hate everything that I ever did, I am lost, I am not confused, I know exactly why I deserve this !

I was happy, I felt privileged, living my little lie, I was blind, I was selfish , secretly wishing inside to die,

I made friends , I went to parties , I put on a happy face , I went home, I cried, I never wondered how I became such a disgrace,

God hates me, he despises me, he gave me love just to take it away, he gave me family , childhood memories , innocence like the night steals the day,

A monster scared me, a terror shook me, I knew I would never be the same, a thief stole from me, a world abandoned me , now I must go on knowing no one else is to blame,

Have mercy, show compassion, don't we all make mistakes? cast dispersions, jump to conclusions, you don't know me or what it takes, continue, to believe , that someday it might all be okay, I can't wait, I am cursed , I am simply just rotting away,

Copyright © Jyssvw22 ... [ 2012-11-20 17:07:05]
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Re: F me (User Rating: 1 )
by mchall629 on Tuesday, 20th November 2012 @ 06:13:06 PM AEST
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The main thing to remember is that everyone makes mistakes in life. Our true character is shown in how we rebound and what we learn from these mistake. The trick isn't to blame yourself but to learn and gain that experience we all require to not make the same decisions later in life..

Re: F me (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 21st November 2012 @ 09:32:36 PM AEST
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Welcome back, friend.

This feels authentic, like real pain went into this. I love the yin/yang of complex feelings, the overwhelming need to drive home the point that you, and you alone are to blame for your woes. The fact that each line is despairing in it's own way, and you have seemingly come to grips with the fact things will not change, or perhaps are too far gone for salvage. In some ways it sounds like someone struggling with inner demons, maybe battling addiction, or an identity crisis. I don't know about the person you wrote about, but the person who wrote this inspiring piece seems fantastically put together to me.

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