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Array ( [sid] => 174321 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sometimes [time] => 2012-11-17 19:19:58 [hometext] => well i seem to be on a roll of writing,trying to occupy my mind [bodytext] => no matter what I do
no matter what it takes
I always seem to find
a way to make mistakes

in time to mess up anything
my heart would try to do
my pride would make a heart
& my mind would paint it blue

an unsuccessfull thing to do
straight from the start
it's a lonely way to be
when you want to win a heart

anything I ever do
on any day or night
shows anything that I do
is worth doing right

just simple little lines
to show just what I see
we do not have to want it
but sometimes it must be

Roy Randolph Andrews (thehotshotpoet)

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Sometimes

Contributed by thehotshotpoet on Saturday, 17th November 2012 @ 07:19:58 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

no matter what I do
no matter what it takes
I always seem to find
a way to make mistakes

in time to mess up anything
my heart would try to do
my pride would make a heart
& my mind would paint it blue

an unsuccessfull thing to do
straight from the start
it's a lonely way to be
when you want to win a heart

anything I ever do
on any day or night
shows anything that I do
is worth doing right

just simple little lines
to show just what I see
we do not have to want it
but sometimes it must be

Roy Randolph Andrews (thehotshotpoet)

Copyright © thehotshotpoet ... [ 2012-11-17 19:19:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Sometimes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 18th November 2012 @ 02:49:47 AM AEST
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reflections are worth writing because they sometimes can tell a story worth reading. in a glimpse I'd say you've built something. recently, I interviewed this young kid for a job who was absolutely brilliant. he said he wanted to be a doctor but decided against it because what he really wanted to do was build something.
sometimes no matter who you are nothing works. that's why I surmise you must have built something. some people who would never call themselves special see special things in others. there's a certain latitude in that.
Thanks!
Peace!

Re: Sometimes (User Rating: 1 )
by desire on Thursday, 29th November 2012 @ 05:57:07 PM AEST
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This is just the sweetest little poem, honest and so you
You know I love your poems. Kudos and thanks for
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