|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Array
(
[sid] => 174202
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Look into her eyes
[time] => 2012-11-03 10:18:27
[hometext] => This is for the ladies, i love yall
[bodytext] => Just look at her! Her eyes tell stories. Stories of old worries. Her heart is an ocean an her mind is unmapped territory. Shes different, her past dont respect her. Left alone her parents neglected her. Men decieve her an sex her. Her heart is abused so she built a wall. Protects her from all. Beaten, cussed at, spit on, cheated on, the list goes on! Did i mention shes a mom? Single parent the dad lives across town, doesnt come around an has a new girlfriend now. Wont see his kid and calls her "phycho". He judges her but doesnt understand her life though. Her pain runs deep as deep as the abyss. Dropped out of school so to pay bills she strips. Antisocial, she lives inside her head. She thinks way too much and wishes she were dead. Could you blame her? Cries because shes the topic of the whispers, words stab like splinters, but walk a mile in her shoes you'll get blisters! Insecure to the world, such a lonely girl. She trusts nobody, hates when dudes call her "shawty". Its an insult to her intelligence. Hollerin' at another chick would be more relevant. Dont waste your time, you'll never get inside her mind. Your that kind, the kind the reason she hates mankind. So look into her eyes, understand why she DONT trust guys. Her truth tells no lies. She knows the game, a man would drowned in the depths of her pain. Forget it, you dont need to know her name. Just listen to her eyes and the stories they tell. The story of an angel dragged through hell.
[comments] => 3
[counter] => 154
[topic] => 48
[informant] => Compton-tre-block
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 0
[ratings] => 0
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => EmotionalPoetry
)
Look into her eyes
Contributed by
Compton-tre-block
on
Saturday, 3rd November 2012 @ 10:18:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
Just look at her! Her eyes tell stories. Stories of old worries. Her heart is an ocean an her mind is unmapped territory. Shes different, her past dont respect her. Left alone her parents neglected her. Men decieve her an sex her. Her heart is abused so she built a wall. Protects her from all. Beaten, cussed at, spit on, cheated on, the list goes on! Did i mention shes a mom? Single parent the dad lives across town, doesnt come around an has a new girlfriend now. Wont see his kid and calls her "phycho". He judges her but doesnt understand her life though. Her pain runs deep as deep as the abyss. Dropped out of school so to pay bills she strips. Antisocial, she lives inside her head. She thinks way too much and wishes she were dead. Could you blame her? Cries because shes the topic of the whispers, words stab like splinters, but walk a mile in her shoes you'll get blisters! Insecure to the world, such a lonely girl. She trusts nobody, hates when dudes call her "shawty". Its an insult to her intelligence. Hollerin' at another chick would be more relevant. Dont waste your time, you'll never get inside her mind. Your that kind, the kind the reason she hates mankind. So look into her eyes, understand why she DONT trust guys. Her truth tells no lies. She knows the game, a man would drowned in the depths of her pain. Forget it, you dont need to know her name. Just listen to her eyes and the stories they tell. The story of an angel dragged through hell.
Copyright ©
Compton-tre-block
... [
2012-11-03 10:18:27]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Look into her eyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by UNORTHODOX on
Saturday, 3rd November 2012 @ 12:25:42 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Truly bravo, all day.
I'm dumb struck at the potency of the vividness unvailed.
We always see this wall without ever even questioning why it's there.
You painted it clear as crystal.
-UNORTHODOX |
|
|
Re: Look into her eyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by NikaShortyyCakeFolsom on
Saturday, 3rd November 2012 @ 04:12:01 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| truly inspiring brought tears to my eyes |
|
|
Re: Look into her eyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by ValDohren on
Sunday, 4th November 2012 @ 07:32:14 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Terrific write, very insightful. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
