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You stayed on Facebook with her
All night long. You said,"If he won't
fight for her, I will."You kissed her
tears gently still.

Your luv will heal her when they
crippled her soul. Your luv will heal her.
Just take her in you arms, take
All that luv they tried to destroy
and go.

Son I know you don't know
Just what to do when she
is paralyzed. Just hold on to
Her until it subsides. Show
her luv is true. Just keep
Fighting. You know what to do

All she ever needed was your luv.
Show her luv comes from God.
They did this to her heart and soul.
Don't you know only luv is her goal.

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YOUR LUV WILL

Contributed by emystar on Saturday, 27th October 2012 @ 12:27:30 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

One night she just couldn't go on.
You stayed on Facebook with her
All night long. You said,"If he won't
fight for her, I will."You kissed her
tears gently still.

Your luv will heal her when they
crippled her soul. Your luv will heal her.
Just take her in you arms, take
All that luv they tried to destroy
and go.

Son I know you don't know
Just what to do when she
is paralyzed. Just hold on to
Her until it subsides. Show
her luv is true. Just keep
Fighting. You know what to do

All she ever needed was your luv.
Show her luv comes from God.
They did this to her heart and soul.
Don't you know only luv is her goal.

It needs some work on it.

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2012-10-27 00:27:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: YOUR LUV WILL (User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Saturday, 27th October 2012 @ 11:17:19 AM AEST
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wow! what an awrsome way to teach one to love another.no matter what they are going true.emystar this is good.thanks alot for this reminder of never giving up.love it.

Re: YOUR LUV WILL (User Rating: 1 )
by ValDohren on Saturday, 27th October 2012 @ 02:50:16 PM AEST
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An unusual write, in line with modern times. A love poem with a difference, but the message is eternal - love wins through in the end. Nice one.

Re: YOUR LUV WILL (User Rating: 1 )
by Rylo on Saturday, 27th October 2012 @ 07:24:18 PM AEST
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This is a great read emy, so many times I have seen so many searching for love. It's truly a blessing when one finds the one who can give it to them. Whether it be from a word, a hug, an ear or even a tear to share.

Re: YOUR LUV WILL (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Friday, 16th November 2012 @ 06:50:31 AM AEST
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Oh Emy this is absolutely stunnng. Eternal truth- love has power supreme and wins out over everythihg. You said this so beautifully adapted to modern times. Thrilling !
Love and blessings Great work my friend.
Eizabeth

Re: YOUR LUV WILL (User Rating: 1 )
by colinb on Friday, 25th January 2013 @ 09:43:58 AM AEST
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WOW!!! i love this poem

Re: YOUR LUV WILL (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Wednesday, 13th March 2013 @ 03:42:11 PM AEST
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I love that your faith is such it empowers your work....I find such peace in the comfort you wear as you write, in faith and your knowingness of the power of faith. Blessings ND.

Re: YOUR LUV WILL (User Rating: 1 )
by CharM on Saturday, 20th April 2013 @ 01:41:28 PM AEST
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sometimes it's just good to have someone be by side ... until they come around and realize how much you mean to them. =)

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