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Array ( [sid] => 174106 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Devastation…. [time] => 2012-10-26 18:44:17 [hometext] => A very sad and devastating story of a family that went to HELL and back just to loose it all in the end :( [bodytext] => All I feel is devastation.
Through out my body a violent vibration.
The rum has worn off I’m going into shock.
The time has come for me to take stock.

What did I do?
Are the beautiful memories too few?
Not to mention our beautiful child.
What you did sends pain through my heart so wild.

I look at her lying on the couch.
And all I can say is ouch.
She doesn't have a clue what just transpired.
It’s you she always admired.

Do you realize how much you are loved?
And you dare to make us feel so unloved!
Tell me what will tomorrow bring.
Is love truly like a ring?

Yes we know you have pain.
But is that reason enough to throw us away again?
Cancer is a terrifying monster to defeat.
But was it necessary to retreat.

Do you truly believe in your heart?
It was right to just depart?
Do you think we would let you fight this alone?
Does it look like we are made of stone?

Bloody hell we love you.
Now what do we do?
Do we sit and cry?
And do you want us to just wait for you to die?

You left like a thief in the night.
We didn't even get a chance to offer you our plight.
We saw you leave that day on a plane.
Not knowing we would never see you again.

RR

27:10:2012
01:32
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 107 [topic] => 75 [informant] => RussellReinhardt [notes] => Spelling corrected per request ~ Moderator_18 Oct 26, 2012 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )
Devastation….

Contributed by RussellReinhardt on Friday, 26th October 2012 @ 06:44:17 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished



All I feel is devastation.
Through out my body a violent vibration.
The rum has worn off I’m going into shock.
The time has come for me to take stock.

What did I do?
Are the beautiful memories too few?
Not to mention our beautiful child.
What you did sends pain through my heart so wild.

I look at her lying on the couch.
And all I can say is ouch.
She doesn't have a clue what just transpired.
It’s you she always admired.

Do you realize how much you are loved?
And you dare to make us feel so unloved!
Tell me what will tomorrow bring.
Is love truly like a ring?

Yes we know you have pain.
But is that reason enough to throw us away again?
Cancer is a terrifying monster to defeat.
But was it necessary to retreat.

Do you truly believe in your heart?
It was right to just depart?
Do you think we would let you fight this alone?
Does it look like we are made of stone?

Bloody hell we love you.
Now what do we do?
Do we sit and cry?
And do you want us to just wait for you to die?

You left like a thief in the night.
We didn't even get a chance to offer you our plight.
We saw you leave that day on a plane.
Not knowing we would never see you again.

RR

27:10:2012
01:32




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Re: Devastation…. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 26th October 2012 @ 11:47:00 PM AEST
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Wow, sounds serious, friend.
Great writing but it's very sad.
PM me if ya need to rattle.
Big huggs, blessings,
emy


Re: Devastation…. (User Rating: 1 )
by ValDohren on Saturday, 27th October 2012 @ 03:10:30 PM AEST
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Very sad indeed - an emotive and heartfelt write.




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