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Array ( [sid] => 174024 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Things Were Looking Very Down. [time] => 2012-10-16 06:49:58 [hometext] => After 18 months of separation my wife told me she loves me and wants to come back home. I could not believe my ears. [bodytext] => Things were looking very down.
It felt as if my heart was flopping around on the ground.
I wondered if you still love me.
For the truth I could not see.
Then you said “I still love you”
Yes what would you like to do?
My heart did a back flip.
And sailed into the sunset like a graceful ship.
At first light I boarded a plane.
Yes for I had so much to gain.
Far away waiting for me was my true love.
All I could do was bow down and thank God above.
For it was the longest time.
And I had paid for my crime.
Now I have peace.
And on life I have a new lease.

RR
15:10:2011
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Things Were Looking Very Down.

Contributed by RussellReinhardt on Tuesday, 16th October 2012 @ 06:49:58 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Things were looking very down.
It felt as if my heart was flopping around on the ground.
I wondered if you still love me.
For the truth I could not see.
Then you said “I still love you”
Yes what would you like to do?
My heart did a back flip.
And sailed into the sunset like a graceful ship.
At first light I boarded a plane.
Yes for I had so much to gain.
Far away waiting for me was my true love.
All I could do was bow down and thank God above.
For it was the longest time.
And I had paid for my crime.
Now I have peace.
And on life I have a new lease.

RR
15:10:2011

Copyright Â© RussellReinhardt ... [ 2012-10-16 06:49:58]
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Re: Things Were Looking Very Down. (User Rating: 1 )
by UNORTHODOX on Tuesday, 16th October 2012 @ 11:33:46 AM AEST
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There's nothing We love more than a happy ending.
I am truly happy for you.
What a beautiful story, and the sincerity of this passage is....

-UNORTHODOX

Re: Things Were Looking Very Down. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 17th October 2012 @ 07:31:50 PM AEST
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Great write.
I wish you every thing good.
Blessings,
emy

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