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Array ( [sid] => 173947 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Temper [time] => 2012-10-06 05:08:02 [hometext] => remember this?? [bodytext] => eye's turn red
your breathing fire
gotta stablise your mood
what your brain Requires

do unto others
as they do unto you
thats not the way to play the game
to keep your pride true

I'm not at risk
for a heart attack
so I dont say nothing
that I cant take back

true as true can be
sometimes it's hard to tell
but it's hard to see anything
when your mad as hell

I know we've all been there
you cant say you have not
just sometimes we have to let loose
& show'em what we got

but we stay within the limits
we dont forsake our family name
once again we apoligise
once again it's the same
Roy Randolph Andrews AKA (thehotshotpoet) [comments] => 1 [counter] => 81 [topic] => 25 [informant] => thehotshotpoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

Temper

Contributed by thehotshotpoet on Saturday, 6th October 2012 @ 05:08:02 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

eye's turn red
your breathing fire
gotta stablise your mood
what your brain Requires

do unto others
as they do unto you
thats not the way to play the game
to keep your pride true

I'm not at risk
for a heart attack
so I dont say nothing
that I cant take back

true as true can be
sometimes it's hard to tell
but it's hard to see anything
when your mad as hell

I know we've all been there
you cant say you have not
just sometimes we have to let loose
& show'em what we got

but we stay within the limits
we dont forsake our family name
once again we apoligise
once again it's the same
Roy Randolph Andrews AKA (thehotshotpoet)

Copyright © thehotshotpoet ... [ 2012-10-06 05:08:02]
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Re: Temper (User Rating: 1 )
by desire on Thursday, 15th November 2012 @ 05:40:16 PM AEST
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well i hope you felt better after getting that poem out, i loved how you did it though, i expected nothing less, kudos great job

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