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Meteorite
Contributed by
plasticherry
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Wednesday, 3rd October 2012 @ 11:39:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Like a meteor I crash into your heart
Locked on target, impact is certain
Scorching flames burning away, all the traces that were before
Meteor shower, I'm dazed by the moonlight
It coils around us just like star seprpent,
The star implodes
Magnetic force pushes us across the universe
I begin to swim through spacial voids just like a fish
Until one day I see you again.
Copyright ©
plasticherry
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2012-10-03 11:39:31] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Meteorite
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Thursday, 4th October 2012 @ 02:58:31 AM AEST (User
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Very creative thinking. Good work.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Meteorite
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stalkee on
Thursday, 4th October 2012 @ 10:16:40 PM AEST (User
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I'm an outer-space junkie so this poem is right up my alley! Beautiful imagery and a beautiful concept, I have felt the exact same way about someone before. You expressed it much better than I ever could! Great job on this piece, it was a pleasure to read. |
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Re: Meteorite
(User Rating: 1 ) by thehotshotpoet on
Saturday, 6th October 2012 @ 06:12:29 AM AEST (User
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thanks for sharing
the hot shot poet |
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