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Array ( [sid] => 173856 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In dreams [time] => 2012-09-21 03:23:31 [hometext] => I have experienced some incredible things since my brother died last month, maybe this will help others struggling with loss a little bit [bodytext] => I've had many a visit with you
since you went away.
Then I wake and realize
you are gone, a dream away.

I sigh and hug my pillow
and wish that visit was real.
When I wake and sit up in bed
for moments happiness is what I feel.

then it drifts away.... in dreams while in waking moments

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friend of mine said to me,
just the other day.
Don't be taking for granted the dreams
loved ones come back to us
even in death.... embrace the moments

then it drifts away.... in dreams while in waking moments...

So for now I will take those visits
and see your shining eyes
the sparkle that was you
the huge smiles all the time
because that is who you were
and I believe it with no doubt
that now you're in Heaven
you still smile that super hero smile
and you are up there riding on the Harley
and making lots of noise
and you have a special following
just a bit different kind of toy

and though you wont walk beside me
once more on this earthly plain
we will walk together every night
or sit talking in the rain....
or go for another Harley ride
and you will scare me and make me scream
just like we did in this life..... my dear sweet brother Kelly
for now I'll take it all again each night.....

if only in my dreams

p.s. I love you but you know it!:)


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In dreams

Contributed by shelby on Friday, 21st September 2012 @ 03:23:31 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



I've had many a visit with you
since you went away.
Then I wake and realize
you are gone, a dream away.

I sigh and hug my pillow
and wish that visit was real.
When I wake and sit up in bed
for moments happiness is what I feel.

then it drifts away.... in dreams while in waking moments

Photobucket

friend of mine said to me,
just the other day.
Don't be taking for granted the dreams
loved ones come back to us
even in death.... embrace the moments

then it drifts away.... in dreams while in waking moments...

So for now I will take those visits
and see your shining eyes
the sparkle that was you
the huge smiles all the time
because that is who you were
and I believe it with no doubt
that now you're in Heaven
you still smile that super hero smile
and you are up there riding on the Harley
and making lots of noise
and you have a special following
just a bit different kind of toy

and though you wont walk beside me
once more on this earthly plain
we will walk together every night
or sit talking in the rain....
or go for another Harley ride
and you will scare me and make me scream
just like we did in this life..... my dear sweet brother Kelly
for now I'll take it all again each night.....

if only in my dreams

p.s. I love you but you know it!:)


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Re: In dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Friday, 21st September 2012 @ 10:23:12 AM AEST
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Hi Shel,

Sounds like heaven might be a bit noisier than
usual.

They never leave us - they just go away for
a while.

Well written, Shel.

Tommy


Re: In dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 21st September 2012 @ 12:56:50 PM AEST
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I know it is still sad times at the loss and missing him but this actually made me smile too. This is the part that brought on a smile and a chuckle:

or go for another Harley ride
and you will scare me and make me scream


I imagine him scaring the ***** out of you. lol.

I truly believe that the ones that have passed on can back and visit us...in dreams and while we're awake.

Even my dog did back in July.

Thank you for and enjoyable and refreshing read, Shal.

Tim

cool dude


Re: In dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by colinb on Monday, 4th March 2013 @ 03:46:46 AM AEST
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I'm sorry for your loss Michelle I'm glad you can feel his presence in your dreams you will always have your memories in your heart of your brother




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