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Array ( [sid] => 173823 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => whats done is done [time] => 2012-09-16 08:32:08 [hometext] => life sometimes gives us a cruel lesson & it is usually over something we did on our own [bodytext] => who controls how your heart works
with all things good or bad
the answer is you do
& for some that may be sad

you control your own action's
& in all Reality
the Reaction that is coming
is the part that we dont see

we never think ahead
when it comes down to our heart
we only see the good things
while it's being torn apart

if we look back on our past
I know I could truly see
the times I gave my heart
no Respect or dignity

well noone has to live with
the wrongs you've done but you
to simply make it easier
pay attention to what you do

I am not a Professional
in any kind of way
but these words stay on my mind
so I'm simply trying to say

every action has a reaction
now this I know is true
all the wrong you've done in your life
it will come back to you

it does not choose sides
for me or anyone
one fraze i carry everywhere is
whats done is done
the hot shot poet
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whats done is done

Contributed by thehotshotpoet on Sunday, 16th September 2012 @ 08:32:08 AM in AEST
Topic: secrets



who controls how your heart works
with all things good or bad
the answer is you do
& for some that may be sad

you control your own action's
& in all Reality
the Reaction that is coming
is the part that we dont see

we never think ahead
when it comes down to our heart
we only see the good things
while it's being torn apart

if we look back on our past
I know I could truly see
the times I gave my heart
no Respect or dignity

well noone has to live with
the wrongs you've done but you
to simply make it easier
pay attention to what you do

I am not a Professional
in any kind of way
but these words stay on my mind
so I'm simply trying to say

every action has a reaction
now this I know is true
all the wrong you've done in your life
it will come back to you

it does not choose sides
for me or anyone
one fraze i carry everywhere is
whats done is done
the hot shot poet




Copyright © thehotshotpoet ... [ 2012-09-16 08:32:08]
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Re: whats done is done (User Rating: 1 )
by desire on Tuesday, 18th September 2012 @ 11:47:48 PM AEST
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Well this is one way to look at It. And for many it rings true
Kudos for the food for though quite a lovely write




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