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stretch and yawn
wonder why
I wake up
on the lawn....
I started to think
tried to use my mind
but I just can't do it
no matter how hard I try,
I tried drugs
and that didn't help
just made things worse
made me want to kill myself.

I got a girl friend
gave her my heart
she just ripped it up
and tore it all apart,
went to work
became a part of the machine
went insane
from doing the routine,
no place to go
and I won't shed no more tears
because I know
no one really cares.

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The 15th Nervous Breakdown

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Friday, 14th September 2012 @ 12:25:50 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I wake up
stretch and yawn
wonder why
I wake up
on the lawn....
I started to think
tried to use my mind
but I just can't do it
no matter how hard I try,
I tried drugs
and that didn't help
just made things worse
made me want to kill myself.

I got a girl friend
gave her my heart
she just ripped it up
and tore it all apart,
went to work
became a part of the machine
went insane
from doing the routine,
no place to go
and I won't shed no more tears
because I know
no one really cares.

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2012-09-14 12:25:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The 15th Nervous Breakdown (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 14th September 2012 @ 08:52:54 PM AEST
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You know better than that.
You should be thanking god for sparing you when You had life saving heart surgery....
Great writing.
Huggs, prayer,
emy

Re: The 15th Nervous Breakdown (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 6th July 2014 @ 12:39:45 PM AEST
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well, i care and am always here for you my friend,
i think if most people are honest:: we all feel like
this sometimes,

hugs n' love nessa

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