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Wind in the Willows
Contributed by
shelby
on
Wednesday, 12th September 2012 @ 12:27:11 AM in AEST
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oops
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Sometimes I think I hear it
maybe its only in my dreams
soft sighs in the summer
drifting in the tree's.
Sometimes I think I smell them
a tangy green delight
that mingles in the air
far from my sight.
Sometimes I want to be there
sitting on the grassy banks
near the waters edge
hidden from anothers view
The summer sun and azure sky
waters ripple around the rocks
the world around me soft and calm
and just the sound, teasing round
wind in the willows....
more to come......
where the story would end differently if I could change a moment sighhhhhhhhh
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2012-09-12 00:27:11]
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Re: Wind in the Willows
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 12th September 2012 @ 01:02:28 AM AEST
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great writing..
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Re: Wind in the Willows
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 12th September 2012 @ 05:07:13 PM AEST
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| I can relate to this, in my journey I still write about nature and about how life moves on. Sometimes the changes hurt us sometimes they help us grow. This is a write that helps me grow |
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Re: Wind in the Willows
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by unknown_utopia on
Friday, 14th September 2012 @ 12:48:17 PM AEST
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wish I could flow like you do
excellent
thanx for sharing |
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Re: Wind in the Willows
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by richard2 on
Friday, 14th September 2012 @ 06:30:39 PM AEST
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I like this very much
excellent choice in words
I think all of us have moments we would have
changed, I know I have.
richard |
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Re: Wind in the Willows
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by Stalkee on
Sunday, 16th September 2012 @ 01:40:20 AM AEST
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| I love reading poetry about nature and I really respect author's who have the ability to write them because I am not a very good writer when it comes to writing about nature. Great writing, it painted a very vivid picture in my mind. |
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