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Is like light reflected on the diamond shards
Like two laser beams
Illuminating the dark in my heart

Lotus bloomed out of your veins
Slowely swaying it's scarlet vines
The flow of water in your heart
Dropped all my feelings in the dark

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Subzero Erotic

Contributed by plasticherry on Wednesday, 5th September 2012 @ 11:03:31 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The glow of your eyes
Is like light reflected on the diamond shards
Like two laser beams
Illuminating the dark in my heart

Lotus bloomed out of your veins
Slowely swaying it's scarlet vines
The flow of water in your heart
Dropped all my feelings in the dark

Copyright © plasticherry ... [ 2012-09-05 11:03:31]
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Re: Subzero Erotic (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Wednesday, 5th September 2012 @ 02:05:31 PM AEST
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Fingertip hot!
Sub-zero? More sizzling than a heat-wave.

Nice one!

Tommy

Re: Subzero Erotic (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 5th September 2012 @ 02:28:50 PM AEST
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The first stanza sounds like the person is totally in love and enamored but the second stanza sorta scared me....

Again, your imagery is so great I could see this:

Lotus bloomed out of your veins
Slowely swaying it's scarlet vines

I mean a lotus coming from someone's veins???!!! lol. Yikes, I'd probably run. :p

And water for blood? Is it an alien from planet Sloj?

Okay, so to make myself perfectly clear, I mean no disrespect. That's just what I got out of it and I loved it and enjoyed it a lot. Why else would there be a lengthy comment?

Thank you for an enjoyable read.

Tim

Re: Subzero Erotic (User Rating: 1 )
by Ellewood on Friday, 7th September 2012 @ 08:00:00 PM AEST
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Very nicely written!!

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