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Array ( [sid] => 17374 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Unable To Worship [time] => 2003-05-10 22:05:00 [hometext] => If you lived my life you'd know. [bodytext] => God I will not worship you
Look at what you've put me through
Theres no one else you'd rather screw
Except for me the proud the true
Wheres the rest the fake the few
Sitting in your wooden pew
With their hope their dying to
Along with me along with you

God I will not worship thee
Look at what you've done to me
Took away my son to be
Drove me to insanity
Leave me here struggling
Wont take my life wont set me free
Im unable to worship dont you see
Cause you are just an uncertainy

God I can not worship fake
Yes I know my lifes at stake
The choice is mine for me to make
My lifes right here for you to take
Dont be scarred dont hesitate
Take my life please dont wait
Hurry up for heavens sake
Put me in Hell so I can bake

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Unable To Worship

Contributed by SuicidalSon on Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

God I will not worship you
Look at what you've put me through
Theres no one else you'd rather screw
Except for me the proud the true
Wheres the rest the fake the few
Sitting in your wooden pew
With their hope their dying to
Along with me along with you

God I will not worship thee
Look at what you've done to me
Took away my son to be
Drove me to insanity
Leave me here struggling
Wont take my life wont set me free
Im unable to worship dont you see
Cause you are just an uncertainy

God I can not worship fake
Yes I know my lifes at stake
The choice is mine for me to make
My lifes right here for you to take
Dont be scarred dont hesitate
Take my life please dont wait
Hurry up for heavens sake
Put me in Hell so I can bake

Copyright © SuicidalSon ... [ 2003-05-10 22:05:00]
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Re: Unable To Worship (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 11th May 2003 @ 12:17:12 AM AEST
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i really hope u don't feel that way, there are so many reasons u should stay...try to realize and don't give up...depend on God and not just luck... i know its hard to determine the truth, but there's some reason for us here, me and u...i'd like to talk to u...if u want to try and figure out why u just can't die...so if u want the chance not to fail...i'll give it to u; here's my email...poetgoddess242002@yahoo.com

Re: Unable To Worship (User Rating: 1 )
by Hoping_To_Be_Me on Sunday, 11th May 2003 @ 10:56:06 AM AEST
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omg i've been through probably the same thing you are and i feel basically the same way about God. please pm if you have time. good write.

Re: Unable To Worship (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Sunday, 11th May 2003 @ 10:02:39 PM AEST
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More emotions on the page,
In this life you can't engage.
Though you say you hurt alot,
Your not looking at what you've got.
Open your eyes and see my friend,
Before you drag unto the end.

There is so much more to live for than a fickle religion and a non-existant God... Just because one son it gone doesn't mean another can't come. Don't measure life by what you don't have, measure it by what you have.

Jaime
YS

Re: Unable To Worship (User Rating: 1 )
by SuicidalSon on Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 07:33:27 AM AEST
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I would like to thank you but if I measure my life by what I have I still equal nothing.

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