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Array ( [sid] => 17373 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => abused [time] => 2003-05-10 21:35:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => come here my dear,
and whisper in my ear,
how much you love me,
and how I'm so pretty.
give me a sweet kiss,
just to prove this bliss.

-but no-

want me, take me, rip my dress,
kiss me, fick me, its all a mess.
gag me, strip me, bruise me,
abuse and use- me.
take control and beat me down,
see an 8 year old cry and frown.
this isn't perfect this isn't great,
i didn't want this kind of date.
why did i lie, say i was 15?
is it my fault that your so mean?

broken and left alone,
no way back to my home,
get away, don't condone,
now i know i'm on my own,
i just let out 1 more moan,
into the abyss of the unknown. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 256 [topic] => 32 [informant] => hardcoreputa [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

abused

Contributed by hardcoreputa on Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 09:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

come here my dear,
and whisper in my ear,
how much you love me,
and how I'm so pretty.
give me a sweet kiss,
just to prove this bliss.

-but no-

want me, take me, rip my dress,
kiss me, fick me, its all a mess.
gag me, strip me, bruise me,
abuse and use- me.
take control and beat me down,
see an 8 year old cry and frown.
this isn't perfect this isn't great,
i didn't want this kind of date.
why did i lie, say i was 15?
is it my fault that your so mean?

broken and left alone,
no way back to my home,
get away, don't condone,
now i know i'm on my own,
i just let out 1 more moan,
into the abyss of the unknown.

Copyright © hardcoreputa ... [ 2003-05-10 21:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: abused (User Rating: 1 )
by Cancer on Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 10:14:26 PM AEST
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i'm not sure how to describe it. i thought this was incredible, but incredible is too weak of a word. the agony really comes through in this one. very gripping write. i look forward to reading more of your work.

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Re: abused (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 05:28:37 AM AEST
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i really enjoyed this write - its dark and powerful but honest and simply written at the same time. you might like to read my poem 'dirty' or 'crave'.

i've read quite a lot of your poetry and i like your style, very mature and truthful. i wish you all the best and hope your 'nympho' days are over - all girls need to realise that sex doesn't equate to love. keep writing, Kate x

Re: abused (User Rating: 1 )
by obsidian_angel on Thursday, 22nd May 2003 @ 05:57:45 AM AEST
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wow, powerful poem. god i think thats all i can say- but well done its great.

Re: abused (User Rating: 1 )
by etherealgurl on Sunday, 25th May 2003 @ 08:30:58 PM AEST
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this one burned me...so f-ing good!! Like fire sex can warm and nurture or burn and kill....this write makes that so incredibly vivid

Re: abused (User Rating: 1 )
by tinka_belle on Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 02:18:50 AM AEST
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i understand
ive been there
done that
and keep doing it again
and again
and again

Re: abused (User Rating: 1 )
by hardcoreputa on Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 03:39:24 AM AEST
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im a little confused by your comment tinka_bell.... do you mean that you keep raping? or you keep putting yourself in the position to be raped or what... if it is the latter... i hope you will be able to understand that no matter what it is NEVER the rape victums fault... i am very sorry that you have been there... it is not a very good place to be... best of luck to you ~Apryl

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