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Array ( [sid] => 173691 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => i am the little girl [time] => 2012-08-26 13:39:09 [hometext] => the little girl who hid inside the woman wanted a voice to speak so i gave her one [bodytext] => I am the little girl who hid inside the woman you see
because she would not of survived had it not been for me
And that is how I came to be
Her heart cried out to me
I felt the pain she tried to hide
and a need to be loved that she denied
I felt the hurt when she realized she had been rejected
And took on the pain when she was neglected
I felt her disgust at every unwanted touch as she lived here ad there
She just wandered why no one seemed to care
i took on the physical and emotional pain when she was raped
But sadly from that situation emotionally she didn't completely escape
I. Feel her freely give love and pretend to take it in return
But before it reaches her heart she lets it burn
She had became detached, she seemed to rather hurt inside than feel
And just went about her life like it was no big deal
But that helped her to keep from falling apart
But it was sad to see ice forming on her heart
I know it's why she keeps love just outside her hearts door
But I know one day with time it will be open once more
I comfort her when she becomes an emotional mess
Im trying to teach her to deal with the stress
I'm the peace of mind that's helping her to understand
That God is preparing her for a bigger plan
So everything she has been through is not in vain
In the end is much to gain
But as the years go by I had to slowly but carefully
reveal
Things to her so she could mentally and emotionally heal
She keeps a smile to mask the pain that has left a trace
Of things she does and doesn't want to face
She feels broken and unable to receive love
Her trust only lies in God above
She may call me the little girl that kept her from falling apart
but I am simply All the love that lives right outside her hear










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i am the little girl

Contributed by desire on Sunday, 26th August 2012 @ 01:39:09 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I am the little girl who hid inside the woman you see
because she would not of survived had it not been for me
And that is how I came to be
Her heart cried out to me
I felt the pain she tried to hide
and a need to be loved that she denied
I felt the hurt when she realized she had been rejected
And took on the pain when she was neglected
I felt her disgust at every unwanted touch as she lived here ad there
She just wandered why no one seemed to care
i took on the physical and emotional pain when she was raped
But sadly from that situation emotionally she didn't completely escape
I. Feel her freely give love and pretend to take it in return
But before it reaches her heart she lets it burn
She had became detached, she seemed to rather hurt inside than feel
And just went about her life like it was no big deal
But that helped her to keep from falling apart
But it was sad to see ice forming on her heart
I know it's why she keeps love just outside her hearts door
But I know one day with time it will be open once more
I comfort her when she becomes an emotional mess
Im trying to teach her to deal with the stress
I'm the peace of mind that's helping her to understand
That God is preparing her for a bigger plan
So everything she has been through is not in vain
In the end is much to gain
But as the years go by I had to slowly but carefully
reveal
Things to her so she could mentally and emotionally heal
She keeps a smile to mask the pain that has left a trace
Of things she does and doesn't want to face
She feels broken and unable to receive love
Her trust only lies in God above
She may call me the little girl that kept her from falling apart
but I am simply All the love that lives right outside her hear














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Re: i am the little girl (User Rating: 1 )
by dvtpdw on Monday, 27th August 2012 @ 08:35:04 AM AEST
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I like the way you conveyed the true emotion and pain. It told the sad story, but gave the reader a glimmer at her hopeful soul. Nice write. Thank you for sharing, P


Re: i am the little girl (User Rating: 1 )
by FragileStrength on Wednesday, 29th August 2012 @ 07:03:16 PM AEST
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How dare you. You made me tear up, and I don't do that. This was so heartbreaking, and painful I almost didn't want to finish. But I felt like I had to, like I owed it to you to finish it. You captured emotions, and pain, and anger, frustration, desperation, sadness, and the feeling of giving up. This was haunting, and amazing. Thank you for sharing.


Re: i am the little girl (User Rating: 1 )
by thehotshotpoet on Thursday, 30th August 2012 @ 07:36:11 AM AEST
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beautiful writing desire,powerful with emotions, & that wall of ice is there for good reason & when the time is right that block of ice will become a simple ice cube in the summers heat,
thanks for sharing
the hot shot poet


Re: i am the little girl (User Rating: 1 )
by UNORTHODOX on Saturday, 1st September 2012 @ 10:20:04 AM AEST
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There are no words
You touch a side of me which
I don't even know exists
You have a strength most will never master
I hear you loud and clear
Admirable passage

-UNORTHODOX


Re: i am the little girl (User Rating: 1 )
by mchall629 on Sunday, 25th November 2012 @ 09:46:09 PM AEST
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Absolutely incredible. Wish I could say more but I am kinda at a loss fro words right now..




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