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Array ( [sid] => 17369 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => A Friendship was lost [time] => 2003-05-10 19:35:00 [hometext] => Written on May 9, 2003. Me and my best friend are goin through a rough argument and our friendship ended! It hurt me really badl bcuz we were best friends for 5 years and i hope that we will regain our friendship and maybe start over! I hope u like it! [bodytext] => We've faught through it all
the laughter & tears
but its come to an end
& its one of my biggest fears.

She left me here standing
alone, I may say
how could she do that
to me that way?

I guess i did her wrong too
thats why were so much alike
we fuss very often
i just wish we wouldn't fight!

Sitting here alone
crying bcuz of her
I dont get my life
its all just a blurr

We got in a fight
it ended just like that
I wish I had the chance
to take it all back

5 years have passed
with laughter & tears
I lost my best friend
it was one of my biggest fears

I guess this is life
& how its crossed
but this is how
a friendship was lost! [comments] => 5 [counter] => 266 [topic] => 16 [informant] => nikkie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

A Friendship was lost

Contributed by nikkie on Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 07:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

We've faught through it all
the laughter & tears
but its come to an end
& its one of my biggest fears.

She left me here standing
alone, I may say
how could she do that
to me that way?

I guess i did her wrong too
thats why were so much alike
we fuss very often
i just wish we wouldn't fight!

Sitting here alone
crying bcuz of her
I dont get my life
its all just a blurr

We got in a fight
it ended just like that
I wish I had the chance
to take it all back

5 years have passed
with laughter & tears
I lost my best friend
it was one of my biggest fears

I guess this is life
& how its crossed
but this is how
a friendship was lost!

Copyright © nikkie ... [ 2003-05-10 19:35:00]
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Re: A Friendship was lost (User Rating: 1 )
by discantbelife on Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 09:08:09 PM AEST
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i love it, just beautiful
i mean it reminds me of when me n my friend stop talking n how much it hurt. But just keep in cuz now we best friends again and i hope u n her will be the same 2

Re: A Friendship was lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 02:49:25 PM AEST
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o my god... you didn't do anything wrong... and if you really want her friendship back... it's totally her call.. just be happy being you.. don't change for anyone... you couldn't have done anything different, it's not your fault.. all you can do is be there for her when she decides she wants you there... coz one day something will happen and it's all gonna fall down around her and she will realize that she was wrong... not you... don't ever believe that you were wrong... you can't please everyone, you know. you just gotta do what's right for you. lyl's ... but good write anyways... ~Crystal~

Re: A Friendship was lost (User Rating: 1 )
by nightrider on Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 05:06:31 PM AEST
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this, unfortunately, hits home with me... my "best friend" of 2 years, suddenly decided that i no longer existed, and cut off all communication with me... she wont ever say hi when we see each other... i hope this works out for you though...

Re: A Friendship was lost (User Rating: 1 )
by stargazer on Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 08:23:14 PM AEST
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This really touches home. My best friend and I are a grade apart. And when she left for high school... she decided that she was much too cool for me and then she started dating a junior, a real jerk... and well... I was jealous. And she just didn't understand and didn't care. But we made up... and are now, stronger than ever.

This was amazing.

A friendship can end but a best friend will always remain in your heart.

Amy

Re: A Friendship was lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 07:57:12 PM AEST
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If you can't get it back together within six months there wasn't enough there for it to last anyway. Sooner or later one or both of you were going to grow out of it.

People change a lot through their late teens

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