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Array ( [sid] => 17366 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The best nightmare (page 1) [time] => 2003-05-10 18:05:00 [hometext] => This is my first story in poetry, this is only the 1st page so if you like it and want the rest you better comment on it otherwise Im leaving the rest out. [bodytext] => A knew day starts as fresh eyes open
awake from the terrors that come only in nightmares.What was that in the dreams you had,the picture is perfect yet its driving you mad.Try to remember why the scene is still fresh,you can still see the bones as their stripped from their flesh.Awake but still shaking the dream was so real,you can not believe the way you now feel.Youve never been scared of a dream before but you never had a dream that was filled with such gore. Are you sure youre awake maybe your sleeping,now check the clock to see if its beeping.It only says eight can that be right, look out the window to see if its light. Have you been sleeping are you sure it was a dream, pinch yourself now and see if you scream.Your sure your awake but the visions still there and now you know that this is no nightmare.You rub at your eyes staring in disbelief, yet theres this feeling of a sort of relief. You wipe at the sweat thats drenching your head, look down at your hands their covered in red.You run to the mirror for a reflection of you, your covered in blood but you dont have a clue. Shocked and amazed no thoughts in your head all you remember is going to bed.Closing your eyes hearing no sound, no sense or awarness of the things that surround. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 236 [topic] => 14 [informant] => SuicidalSon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )
The best nightmare (page 1)

Contributed by SuicidalSon on Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



A knew day starts as fresh eyes open
awake from the terrors that come only in nightmares.What was that in the dreams you had,the picture is perfect yet its driving you mad.Try to remember why the scene is still fresh,you can still see the bones as their stripped from their flesh.Awake but still shaking the dream was so real,you can not believe the way you now feel.Youve never been scared of a dream before but you never had a dream that was filled with such gore. Are you sure youre awake maybe your sleeping,now check the clock to see if its beeping.It only says eight can that be right, look out the window to see if its light. Have you been sleeping are you sure it was a dream, pinch yourself now and see if you scream.Your sure your awake but the visions still there and now you know that this is no nightmare.You rub at your eyes staring in disbelief, yet theres this feeling of a sort of relief. You wipe at the sweat thats drenching your head, look down at your hands their covered in red.You run to the mirror for a reflection of you, your covered in blood but you dont have a clue. Shocked and amazed no thoughts in your head all you remember is going to bed.Closing your eyes hearing no sound, no sense or awarness of the things that surround.




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Re: The best nightmare (page 1) (User Rating: 1 )
by tinka_belle on Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 08:27:07 AM AEST
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mmm im interested in what happens next
this really drew me in
i like it
please post the next page
pretty please :)




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