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Array ( [sid] => 173659 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => and the moon will rise [time] => 2012-08-22 13:22:48 [hometext] => Once you make a decision, the universe conspires to make it happen. ~Ralph Waldo Emerson [bodytext] => in the library
in a cucumber seed

She drags me

on the sidewalk
(briskly walking alone)
in a leaf

the harsh Mistress

in a snowflake
in a cuppa

(enlightened)
I see Fate

(in a tavern)
it's the olive
(at mother's)
it's the cane

and then the darkening

with a graveyard
to walk
and a vauge odor
of musk vodka dusk

and rain.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 335 [topic] => 73 [informant] => ming [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

and the moon will rise

Contributed by ming on Wednesday, 22nd August 2012 @ 01:22:48 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

in the library
in a cucumber seed

She drags me

on the sidewalk
(briskly walking alone)
in a leaf

the harsh Mistress

in a snowflake
in a cuppa

(enlightened)
I see Fate

(in a tavern)
it's the olive
(at mother's)
it's the cane

and then the darkening

with a graveyard
to walk
and a vauge odor
of musk vodka dusk

and rain.

Copyright © ming ... [ 2012-08-22 13:22:48]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: and the moon will rise (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Thursday, 23rd August 2012 @ 10:13:28 AM AEST
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Truly abstract, partially transparent, and
exquisitely composed.

T

Re: and the moon will rise (User Rating: 1 )
by duff on Monday, 27th August 2012 @ 03:12:56 PM AEST
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Gripping and far out Ming. The level of your creativity is on another planet. Your style is unique and it clinches every time. Awesome job.

duff

Re: and the moon will rise (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Wednesday, 5th September 2012 @ 08:21:25 PM AEST
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my dear ming
exquisite indeed. . .
smiles
elle

Re: and the moon will rise (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Friday, 27th March 2015 @ 02:37:08 PM AEST
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Musky like nivea and the graveyard where wine n vodka was drunk to get drunk and I counted sheep while two mag pies found the love I longed for in a nearby tree ironically instead of me. Aww silver shame lane so dark and bright . That's where I learned to dance in the rain and found my super moon and double rainbow. Love your poem . Strange as it seems this really could be about me although I should say that I doubt it is I sometimes believe as many as six impossible things before breakfast so why stop now. Love your oracle other worldly poetry. It is as if you are god as a poet .xxx

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