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Array ( [sid] => 17354 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => story of a gurl [time] => 2003-05-10 12:05:00 [hometext] => this is writtin by my big sis jolene the one i was askin advice for in i need ur help....... shes still alive though [bodytext] => I was in a lonely world
A world with no love
No atention and filled with hate
I've sucked up it up for about 14 years
I'm about to go physco and it anit funny
I try to over come
but they wont leave me alone
I feel lonely
I feel so mad
I feel so angry
No1 loves me
No1 cares
I think i'm going crazy but i wouldnt know it cause
I'm living blackwhole
No b-day party's
No presents
No Easter
No Santa
No Bunny, why God?
Why was I sent here?
What have I done to make you soo mad?
What have I done to you to make me feel so bad?
I must be dumb
I must be stupid
Someone tell me what have I done to have no love from me mommy and daddy
Maybe if I'm God
My mom could want to hug me
Here comes daddy
I here him curse my name
Please dont say that I've been bad
He see's my tears
Now I'm going to get it!!!
He throws me agaist the wall
in the glass I lay motionless......
My name is Jolene May i am 14 years old and tonight my daddy murdered me

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story of a gurl

Contributed by spoiledbrat on Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I was in a lonely world
A world with no love
No atention and filled with hate
I've sucked up it up for about 14 years
I'm about to go physco and it anit funny
I try to over come
but they wont leave me alone
I feel lonely
I feel so mad
I feel so angry
No1 loves me
No1 cares
I think i'm going crazy but i wouldnt know it cause
I'm living blackwhole
No b-day party's
No presents
No Easter
No Santa
No Bunny, why God?
Why was I sent here?
What have I done to make you soo mad?
What have I done to you to make me feel so bad?
I must be dumb
I must be stupid
Someone tell me what have I done to have no love from me mommy and daddy
Maybe if I'm God
My mom could want to hug me
Here comes daddy
I here him curse my name
Please dont say that I've been bad
He see's my tears
Now I'm going to get it!!!
He throws me agaist the wall
in the glass I lay motionless......
My name is Jolene May i am 14 years old and tonight my daddy murdered me





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Re: story of a gurl (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 03:48:17 PM AEST
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wow. this poem is very deep and hits a little to close to home. nicely written. good job


Re: story of a gurl (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 12:35:46 AM AEST
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This is good and sad. Very good


Re: story of a gurl (User Rating: 1 )
by wazarov on Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 02:30:22 AM AEST
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madness from loneliness is a common sickness today, i hope you find rest.


Re: story of a gurl (User Rating: 1 )
by wazarov on Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 02:30:24 AM AEST
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madness from loneliness is a common sickness today, i hope you find rest.


Re: story of a gurl (User Rating: 1 )
by BlackFire9786 on Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 12:22:59 AM AEST
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wow, this is a powerful poem, i can relate, i know exactly how you feel. I hope things get lots better, many hugs! Luv ya lotz-Lisa




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