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Array ( [sid] => 173517 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost in Love [time] => 2012-08-02 07:21:42 [hometext] => I do assume that this too is simply part of life,well my life anyway [bodytext] => caught within a pattern
that appears to stay with me
chewing on my pride
devouring dignity

I use to see potential
what my dreams were all made of
now all I seem to be
is lost in love

lost within this circle
of this place & time
I feel like I've done something wrong
like I've committed a crime

but I would not indanger
my kids,my wife or me
though life is never simple
with my own reality

I look up to the sky
& I ask the lord above
why must I be
lost in love
the hot shot poet [comments] => 2 [counter] => 116 [topic] => 61 [informant] => thehotshotpoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Lost in Love

Contributed by thehotshotpoet on Thursday, 2nd August 2012 @ 07:21:42 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

caught within a pattern
that appears to stay with me
chewing on my pride
devouring dignity

I use to see potential
what my dreams were all made of
now all I seem to be
is lost in love

lost within this circle
of this place & time
I feel like I've done something wrong
like I've committed a crime

but I would not indanger
my kids,my wife or me
though life is never simple
with my own reality

I look up to the sky
& I ask the lord above
why must I be
lost in love
the hot shot poet

Copyright © thehotshotpoet ... [ 2012-08-02 07:21:42]
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Re: Lost in Love (User Rating: 1 )
by desire on Thursday, 2nd August 2012 @ 10:19:52 PM AEST
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Interesting I must say,
I like it. I honestly never
Thought of it that way.
Shirlee

Re: Lost in Love (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Friday, 3rd August 2012 @ 03:49:14 PM AEST
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Love can feel like a trap,
a slayer of your dreams,
it can wrap you in its shroud,
to be carried down its stream,

its the path that many want,
and the one that some don't choose,
but remember friend... appreciate,
and you really cannot lose.

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