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what ever you must do
there must be a reason
she no longer believes in you

if you have never cheated
& you never once told her a lie
then get down to the confusing part
of finding out why

chances are that the answer
is something you do not want to hear
it could possibly destroy
something you hold very dear

none the less it's the truth
you must seek to find
where you are not so confused
or walking around blind

keep in mind the truth can hurt you
but the cold reality
is this is part of life
& what must be will be

the not knowing is the hardest part
that you will ever face
but you must find out if you can
to put respective back in it's place

so serious or silly
you must give your heart a rest
so when you find your answer
I wish you all the best
the hot shot poet

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Fix It

Contributed by thehotshotpoet on Tuesday, 24th July 2012 @ 06:52:18 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

find out what it is
what ever you must do
there must be a reason
she no longer believes in you

if you have never cheated
& you never once told her a lie
then get down to the confusing part
of finding out why

chances are that the answer
is something you do not want to hear
it could possibly destroy
something you hold very dear

none the less it's the truth
you must seek to find
where you are not so confused
or walking around blind

keep in mind the truth can hurt you
but the cold reality
is this is part of life
& what must be will be

the not knowing is the hardest part
that you will ever face
but you must find out if you can
to put respective back in it's place

so serious or silly
you must give your heart a rest
so when you find your answer
I wish you all the best
the hot shot poet

Copyright © thehotshotpoet ... [ 2012-07-24 06:52:18]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Fix It (User Rating: 1 )
by VR2776 on Tuesday, 24th July 2012 @ 09:42:01 AM AEST
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simple staright to the point nice flow ... :)

Re: Fix It (User Rating: 1 )
by dvtpdw on Tuesday, 24th July 2012 @ 04:10:30 PM AEST
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I liked that your words took the heart of the manner, and showed the reality underneath. I liked the flow, and how the words carried the message. Great write, as always. Thank you for sharing, P

Re: Fix It (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 24th July 2012 @ 09:36:29 PM AEST
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Nicely written and very true and wise.
You speak of something a little different that what Iv had going on....... sometimes the truth causes a waterfall, one feels one might drown in... specially when it is secrets from the past.

Michelle

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