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Array ( [sid] => 173364 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The pillars that made me tall [time] => 2012-07-16 07:13:20 [hometext] => This was a poem i wrote long ago when i first left home and embarked on an adventure called life :-) my mom passed it to me when i came to visit this time thought i would post it up :-) [bodytext] => I come into this world, I couldn't talk.
You supported me and taught me to walk
Learning to survive and stand tall in this world
I had many falls but you carried me onward

At sad times , you took care of me
When I needed privacy, you let me be
Helping me to grow , to what I am today
You wanted me to learn and to have fun and play

It's time for me to journey on forward, alone
Doing what I love to do, for what I was born
I know the road ahead will be hard to go on
But your teachings and prayers will help me carry on

To Reach the goal , that I set in life
Will take a lot of pain, and a whole lot of strife
But I will always take these challenges smiling
Without any fear or without my heart crying.

You have helped me so far and it's with you I stay
But now it's time for me to make my own way
I would travel far and be alone in a new place
But for me it would be an adventure I love to face

I thank fate for making us a family
The best parents a person could have till eternity
Same goes for my big brother who I love dearly
So this is a goodbye letter, I write thankfully
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 136 [topic] => 23 [informant] => theeman [notes] => Spelling corrected per request ~ Moderator_18 July 16, 2012 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )
The pillars that made me tall

Contributed by theeman on Monday, 16th July 2012 @ 07:13:20 AM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems



I come into this world, I couldn't talk.
You supported me and taught me to walk
Learning to survive and stand tall in this world
I had many falls but you carried me onward

At sad times , you took care of me
When I needed privacy, you let me be
Helping me to grow , to what I am today
You wanted me to learn and to have fun and play

It's time for me to journey on forward, alone
Doing what I love to do, for what I was born
I know the road ahead will be hard to go on
But your teachings and prayers will help me carry on

To Reach the goal , that I set in life
Will take a lot of pain, and a whole lot of strife
But I will always take these challenges smiling
Without any fear or without my heart crying.

You have helped me so far and it's with you I stay
But now it's time for me to make my own way
I would travel far and be alone in a new place
But for me it would be an adventure I love to face

I thank fate for making us a family
The best parents a person could have till eternity
Same goes for my big brother who I love dearly
So this is a goodbye letter, I write thankfully




Copyright © theeman ... [ 2012-07-16 07:13:20]
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Re: The pillars that made me tall (User Rating: 1 )
by TCK on Monday, 16th July 2012 @ 10:37:50 AM AEST
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Nice. :) Does a good job of representing life's journey and also showing how much you care about your familly. Well done.

TCK


Re: The pillars that made me tall (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 16th July 2012 @ 03:54:20 PM AEST
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Very beautiful, and I'm sure it's cherished.
Such a touching write.
Smiles, blessings,
emy




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