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Array ( [sid] => 173359 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The True Feeling of Missing Someone. [time] => 2012-07-15 07:12:29 [hometext] => Survivors Guilt [bodytext] => Innocence ran all the way through these veins of mine
If something dangerous came, I’d turn my back at the smallest sign
Naïve to the going on of the world around
Preferred it like that, we were sailing sound
But then I met you, and it opened me up
Yeah im not afraid to say you messed me up
I’ve never known such a feeling as when I was with you
The happiness I felt that week, you have no clue

Then we were torn, apart
And left to mourn, my heart
It’s like I know knew where to start
And I now know what missing someone is like
The only relief I get is speaking to this mic
People used to care about me, but I messed them around
I can feel the anger coming, swing at anything found
Time to get back on track, get out of this sack
Get my own back, and have another hack
I don’t lack more then you; I just give it twice the whack
So here we go

I sit here looking at these pictures
And my feelings twist and turn in mixtures
But I miss you more than I could ever say
You had my heart from the very first hey
There you were, sitting on the beach
Seeming so far, yet you were in my reach
That day when I first talked to you
Devils cried, and angels flew

Every time I saw you, the butterflies took
Like a fisherman, you had me by the hook
Watching your face as I sailed away
I was crying inside as I wished you could stay
Just another day, that’s all I needed
But we were destined away, no matter how much I pleaded
And I’ll never forget, the moments we shared
This is how im telling you how much I care

Your smile, nothing compares,
When I see that, no worries or cares
That time at the party, out on the deck
That night your sister died, and your tears tracked down my neck
I made that promise ill always have you
So whatever else happens, to this I stay true

Now I may not have seen you for year after year,
I may not be there to catch every tear
But deep down you know we will never part
Your name is forever written across my heart
I lay in bed most nights, just missing us
Knowing no matter what, I had you, was the biggest plus
We pulled through so much together
No one was better
But I guess we all have to move on someday

Still now tears come when I hear your name
I remember that night when you said you felt the same
What I would do to see you again one day
It’s for you, every day that I still pray
The world is so much darker without you here
And every dark shadow seems to hold so much more fear
I fell for you, im not scared to tell
Because I know it was for an angel, that I fell

When that car hit us it seemed so surreal
It was like reality was numbing me from all I should feel
Watching your life slip away with nothing to do
Listening as you whispered your last words, this was true,
It was my fault you were even in that car
You were destined to go so far
But that night, as you died in my arms
As you clung on so desperately, both your hands in my palms
It ruined me, from the inside of my head
As you whispered your last words
‘I love you’ is what you said
And I caught your last tear as it fell
And you kissed me,
That kiss is what I will never forget
You were perfect since the moment we met
I wish it was me who had died that night
But no it was you, with which the angels took flight

The driver was drunk you see
So the blame was on me
I let him drive that car, and made you come too
I hate myself so much; it’s so hard to get through
He died too, my best mate who was driving us
I was the only survivor, but that is no plus
I wish I could take back everything that I did
Ever since I lost you both that night, I’ve hid
Hid from my emotions and the pain in me
It hurts so bad I just need to flee

I sit next to your gravestone as I write this poem
Because like I promised, wherever you are is my home
You’re the only one who ever understood what I went through
I know your still with me, after all you promised
Whatever we went through, I would always have you.



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The True Feeling of Missing Someone.

Contributed by Damian on Sunday, 15th July 2012 @ 07:12:29 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Innocence ran all the way through these veins of mine
If something dangerous came, I’d turn my back at the smallest sign
Naïve to the going on of the world around
Preferred it like that, we were sailing sound
But then I met you, and it opened me up
Yeah im not afraid to say you messed me up
I’ve never known such a feeling as when I was with you
The happiness I felt that week, you have no clue

Then we were torn, apart
And left to mourn, my heart
It’s like I know knew where to start
And I now know what missing someone is like
The only relief I get is speaking to this mic
People used to care about me, but I messed them around
I can feel the anger coming, swing at anything found
Time to get back on track, get out of this sack
Get my own back, and have another hack
I don’t lack more then you; I just give it twice the whack
So here we go

I sit here looking at these pictures
And my feelings twist and turn in mixtures
But I miss you more than I could ever say
You had my heart from the very first hey
There you were, sitting on the beach
Seeming so far, yet you were in my reach
That day when I first talked to you
Devils cried, and angels flew

Every time I saw you, the butterflies took
Like a fisherman, you had me by the hook
Watching your face as I sailed away
I was crying inside as I wished you could stay
Just another day, that’s all I needed
But we were destined away, no matter how much I pleaded
And I’ll never forget, the moments we shared
This is how im telling you how much I care

Your smile, nothing compares,
When I see that, no worries or cares
That time at the party, out on the deck
That night your sister died, and your tears tracked down my neck
I made that promise ill always have you
So whatever else happens, to this I stay true

Now I may not have seen you for year after year,
I may not be there to catch every tear
But deep down you know we will never part
Your name is forever written across my heart
I lay in bed most nights, just missing us
Knowing no matter what, I had you, was the biggest plus
We pulled through so much together
No one was better
But I guess we all have to move on someday

Still now tears come when I hear your name
I remember that night when you said you felt the same
What I would do to see you again one day
It’s for you, every day that I still pray
The world is so much darker without you here
And every dark shadow seems to hold so much more fear
I fell for you, im not scared to tell
Because I know it was for an angel, that I fell

When that car hit us it seemed so surreal
It was like reality was numbing me from all I should feel
Watching your life slip away with nothing to do
Listening as you whispered your last words, this was true,
It was my fault you were even in that car
You were destined to go so far
But that night, as you died in my arms
As you clung on so desperately, both your hands in my palms
It ruined me, from the inside of my head
As you whispered your last words
‘I love you’ is what you said
And I caught your last tear as it fell
And you kissed me,
That kiss is what I will never forget
You were perfect since the moment we met
I wish it was me who had died that night
But no it was you, with which the angels took flight

The driver was drunk you see
So the blame was on me
I let him drive that car, and made you come too
I hate myself so much; it’s so hard to get through
He died too, my best mate who was driving us
I was the only survivor, but that is no plus
I wish I could take back everything that I did
Ever since I lost you both that night, I’ve hid
Hid from my emotions and the pain in me
It hurts so bad I just need to flee

I sit next to your gravestone as I write this poem
Because like I promised, wherever you are is my home
You’re the only one who ever understood what I went through
I know your still with me, after all you promised
Whatever we went through, I would always have you.







Copyright © Damian ... [ 2012-07-15 07:12:29]
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Re: The True Feeling of Missing Someone. (User Rating: 1 )
by LauranHyde on Wednesday, 12th September 2012 @ 08:31:41 PM AEST
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I love you.
& you know i'll always be here for you, anytime with any problem. your amazing, and trust me so did she. you cant fix the past but you can enlighten your future. your so talented, yet you have so much self doubt. you need to see the beauty inside of you and not all your faults. your not this bad person you say you are. you seriously mean so much to me. and no matter how many times you say no one cares deep down you know i do. and that i wont ever let you down. she'll always be in your heart, just hold on to your memories there the only thing that'll keep you going. xx




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