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Array ( [sid] => 173338 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => It still feels like home. . . [time] => 2012-07-12 11:37:25 [hometext] => [bodytext] => sweet summer
blooms in action
your cat
verses the camera
no creature should be that cute-
except in legend
or through some deadly spell. . .
you tell me it's your ex-girlfriend
come back to "speak no evil"
we laugh. . .
our laughter chases the sun
as it sets across the tracks

summer day
pre-made in some heavenly concoction
I sit. . . criss-cross, applesauce
my pencil
verses your camera
avenging a thousand words
reflexively. . .
like a spirit in the night
like a light cutting through darkness
. . . I taste a hint
of summer
on the last whisper
of your lips
salvation for a poet's soul. . .
(be the leaf)
commission green
double up on your spell of love
& I'll watch over you
like a secret keeper. . . [comments] => 5 [counter] => 311 [topic] => 2 [informant] => elle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

It still feels like home. . .

Contributed by elle on Thursday, 12th July 2012 @ 11:37:25 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

sweet summer
blooms in action
your cat
verses the camera
no creature should be that cute-
except in legend
or through some deadly spell. . .
you tell me it's your ex-girlfriend
come back to "speak no evil"
we laugh. . .
our laughter chases the sun
as it sets across the tracks

summer day
pre-made in some heavenly concoction
I sit. . . criss-cross, applesauce
my pencil
verses your camera
avenging a thousand words
reflexively. . .
like a spirit in the night
like a light cutting through darkness
. . . I taste a hint
of summer
on the last whisper
of your lips
salvation for a poet's soul. . .
(be the leaf)
commission green
double up on your spell of love
& I'll watch over you
like a secret keeper. . .

Copyright © elle ... [ 2012-07-12 11:37:25]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: It still feels like home. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 12th July 2012 @ 01:09:28 PM AEST
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:)

Re: It still feels like home. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 12th July 2012 @ 07:24:53 PM AEST
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Awesome writing.
blessings,
emy

Re: It still feels like home. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Friday, 13th July 2012 @ 10:26:04 PM AEST
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nicely worded, elle. A heady fragrance of love and warmth on a canopy of words, like jasmine on the wind as Summer marks its turf.

S.

Re: It still feels like home. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 18th July 2012 @ 02:16:32 PM AEST
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Lurking in the shadows he, the Timotheus one, comes here often. I like it here, oh inspirational One.

Re: It still feels like home. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Wednesday, 22nd August 2012 @ 01:46:34 PM AEST
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Ahh. We heady seekers of love and ink...

'on the last whisper
of your lips
salvation for a poet's soul. . .
(be the leaf)
commission green
double up on your spell of love
& I'll watch over you
like a secret keeper'

I connect.

ming

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