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excactly what we feel
in order to reach out
with the things that are real

I had come to a point
so unwelcome in my life
the most desturbing part
was losing my wife

I couldnot stand the cruelty
towards my children or myself
so i had no other choice
but to find a solutionn in its self

the only one I found
left me no other course
but to tell my wife I've had enough
I wanted a divorce

so here i am now
as confused as i can be
but i wonder if she kows
or can see what i can see

there was a time i felt
that i had actually won
but now all i feel
is that i am actually done
the hot shot poet [comments] => 1 [counter] => 95 [topic] => 25 [informant] => thehotshotpoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

DONE

Contributed by thehotshotpoet on Thursday, 12th July 2012 @ 07:13:51 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

sometimes we must write
excactly what we feel
in order to reach out
with the things that are real

I had come to a point
so unwelcome in my life
the most desturbing part
was losing my wife

I couldnot stand the cruelty
towards my children or myself
so i had no other choice
but to find a solutionn in its self

the only one I found
left me no other course
but to tell my wife I've had enough
I wanted a divorce

so here i am now
as confused as i can be
but i wonder if she kows
or can see what i can see

there was a time i felt
that i had actually won
but now all i feel
is that i am actually done
the hot shot poet

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Re: DONE (User Rating: 1 )
by desire on Wednesday, 18th July 2012 @ 06:59:51 PM AEST
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this is a wonderful writhe.. its never easy when we have to admitt to ourselves that the love we share is over, we just have to keep pushing forward and be ok with decisions that we have made... stay strong and focused
no one knows you better than you do...shirlee

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