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Mistress
Contributed by
richard2
on
Wednesday, 11th July 2012 @ 06:53:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Mistress
As I walked through the rain
Each drop crying on the pavement
Making my feet dance through tears,
I let my heart be washed by god.
For I saw the purpose in the clouds;
A reason in the rainbow, coming into
The sudden sunlit beauty of the street,
To teach the finality of sorrow,
A concrete mistress that I cannot leave
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2012-07-11 18:53:42] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Mistress
(User Rating: 1 ) by Reverend_T on
Thursday, 12th July 2012 @ 10:09:21 PM AEST (User
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Better than "Boulevard of Broken Dreams". |
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Re: Mistress
(User Rating: 1 ) by PreciousKitten on
Saturday, 14th July 2012 @ 08:23:00 PM AEST (User
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I like it |
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Re: Mistress
(User Rating: 1 ) by theeman on
Monday, 16th July 2012 @ 07:37:03 AM AEST (User
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I Like how this paints pictures in my minds canvas well done |
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Re: Mistress
(User Rating: 1 ) by desire on
Sunday, 19th August 2012 @ 02:14:53 PM AEST (User
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This is a lovely poem I truly enjoyed
Every word |
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Re: Mistress
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 1st July 2014 @ 11:58:01 PM AEST (User
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an exquisite write, so beautifully and elegantly penned,
...::perfection::....
hugs n' love nessa
@->>->>-- |
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