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Where Was It Written? . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Wednesday, 11th July 2012 @ 12:13:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Where was it written when first i was born,
that angels should favor me?
i who loved you as the sun love's the morn
and the shore love's the open
sea.
♥
Where was it writtten that i'd be alowd
to love someone such as you?
amidst all the rain that fell from my cloud
your sunlight came shining
through.
♥
You with your sweetness that melted my core
one kiss in the night said it all,
for who in there right mind wouldn't want more?
or in love with you would not
fall.
♥
Where was it written that you'd come along
and one day become my wife?
touching my soul like a beautiful song
that was meant to be sung for life.
♥
Where it was written you already know
of me you became a part,
hot off the press with your loving caress
you wrote it right here,
in
my
heart.
♥
Ben
my♥'svoice
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Re: Where Was It Written? . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by Tiny_Tina on
Wednesday, 11th July 2012 @ 01:03:08 AM AEST (User
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Good grief! Prove your love with correct spelling! |
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Re: Where Was It Written? . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Sunday, 22nd July 2012 @ 08:17:09 PM AEST (User
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Wow a blast from the past, where have you been my friend? Beautiful poem
Hugs
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Re: Where Was It Written? . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Thursday, 6th September 2012 @ 07:20:13 PM AEST (User
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Great writing, always.
You get your message out loud and clear.
I know Joan luvs it no matter how you spell it.
Huggs, smiles,
emy
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Re: Where Was It Written? . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 27th April 2014 @ 01:36:03 PM AEST (User
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i kant blive th aud a city of sme peeple!
ben your poetry is and has always been
beautifully outstanding! you are the kindest
sweetest most loving guy to your wife and the
above comment really floors me, there are
people like you who know how to write and
get your point across to your readers heart
and soul, making one feel a part of it or bring
memories; not all writers are able to do this,
big hugs n' love nessa |
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