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Array ( [sid] => 173109 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You're Not Done [time] => 2012-06-21 13:26:35 [hometext] => I wrote for my friend who recently tried committing suicide,I really wish he would have talked to me and I'm just happy he failed. So don't do it,you're young and have your whole future ahead of you. [bodytext] => Don't give up,
not just yet.
You're still young.
Put down the gun,hun,
throw away those pills,
you don't need them.
You're not done,
not just yet,
you're still so young.
Go live your life,hun,
have fun and fall in love.
Put away the blade,
come down from up there.
Go live your life,hun,
don't give up,
not ever.
You're not done. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 116 [topic] => 55 [informant] => BekachewSunderman1011 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

You're Not Done

Contributed by BekachewSunderman1011 on Thursday, 21st June 2012 @ 01:26:35 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Don't give up,
not just yet.
You're still young.
Put down the gun,hun,
throw away those pills,
you don't need them.
You're not done,
not just yet,
you're still so young.
Go live your life,hun,
have fun and fall in love.
Put away the blade,
come down from up there.
Go live your life,hun,
don't give up,
not ever.
You're not done.

Copyright © BekachewSunderman1011 ... [ 2012-06-21 13:26:35]
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Re: You're Not Done (User Rating: 1 )
by nluchett on Thursday, 21st June 2012 @ 03:01:35 PM AEST
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Very happy to hear he/she was unsuccessful . Best advice I can say is tell them to start dwelling on the positives in their life not the negatives. That's what I did to help me get through my depression.

Gotta wake up and live!

Re: You're Not Done (User Rating: 1 )
by soulsongs on Thursday, 21st June 2012 @ 03:30:20 PM AEST
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Continue to keep him close and keep telling him how much he means to you until his pain is under control. God bless you, him, and all of us.

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