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I'm Done
Contributed by
BekachewSunderman1011
on
Wednesday, 20th June 2012 @ 08:21:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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I'm sick of your lies,
coming undone over time.
I'm sick of the pain,
coming from the ones I love the most.
I'm sick of this life,
falling apart all around me.
I'm moving on.
I'm done with this world.
I'm done with your shiit.
I'm done being strong.
I'm done with everything.
Good bye,
cruel,harsh world,
I say as I pull the triggar,
I'm done.
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BekachewSunderman1011
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2012-06-20 20:21:29] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I'm Done
(User Rating: 1 ) by Butterflyperfect on
Thursday, 21st June 2012 @ 12:36:31 PM AEST (User
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I think the simplicity works well here to convey the emotion. Moving on is important when the time comes where you have to change life for yourself alone, but moving on by pulling the trigger is powerful imagery.... I would use that as a drive to be strong and do what you need to do for you. That's power.
Great Write!
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