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Array ( [sid] => 172951 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~That Girl~ [time] => 2012-06-11 05:52:29 [hometext] => [bodytext] => She's beautiful, yet insecure
her heart, soul, and love is pure
she's hurt and depressed
she's still loving while he's already lost interest

She's curious but scared to get close
she's the only one fighting the most
she might get trapped again
she's cautious because stupid men

You're her only friend left now
she wants to tell you she still loves you...but how?
she only feels safe around you
yet, leaving is the only thing you do

She remembers all the heartbreaking memories
and now she believes you two are enemies
tell her how you feel
at least she's not fake...she's real

you treat her like trash and don't even notice
thanks to you, she can't even focus
see how bad you hurt her from time to time?
but she fakes a smile and pretends to be fine

Despite how much you hurt her
you can ALWAYS be sure
because you have her locked in tight
she STILL believes it was love at first sight

She wants you to know that you make her day
and that she's here forever to stay
no matter what you say or do
she will ALWAYS love you

She can't imagine life without you
and she wonders why you don't feel this way too
she starts to think there's something wrong
and yet she still manages to stay strong

Even though all you've caused her is heartbreak
she doesn't mind so she'll take and take
she'll give and give but it's not enough
she cries and tries to be a little tough

You don't understand that she's under a lot of stress
but even if you knew, she knows, you couldn't care less
she wants to ask you if you care
but your answer could be too much for her to bare

She doesn't want you to feel bad
especially for her, it just makes her mad
she blames herself for everything
even though she didn't do anything

She's stronger than you think
but when she sees you, it makes her heart sink
and when you look VERY closely
you'll see ~That Girl~ is me



Kelseigh, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 1 poem for each one you submit.

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~That Girl~

Contributed by Kelseigh on Monday, 11th June 2012 @ 05:52:29 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



She's beautiful, yet insecure
her heart, soul, and love is pure
she's hurt and depressed
she's still loving while he's already lost interest

She's curious but scared to get close
she's the only one fighting the most
she might get trapped again
she's cautious because stupid men

You're her only friend left now
she wants to tell you she still loves you...but how?
she only feels safe around you
yet, leaving is the only thing you do

She remembers all the heartbreaking memories
and now she believes you two are enemies
tell her how you feel
at least she's not fake...she's real

you treat her like trash and don't even notice
thanks to you, she can't even focus
see how bad you hurt her from time to time?
but she fakes a smile and pretends to be fine

Despite how much you hurt her
you can ALWAYS be sure
because you have her locked in tight
she STILL believes it was love at first sight

She wants you to know that you make her day
and that she's here forever to stay
no matter what you say or do
she will ALWAYS love you

She can't imagine life without you
and she wonders why you don't feel this way too
she starts to think there's something wrong
and yet she still manages to stay strong

Even though all you've caused her is heartbreak
she doesn't mind so she'll take and take
she'll give and give but it's not enough
she cries and tries to be a little tough

You don't understand that she's under a lot of stress
but even if you knew, she knows, you couldn't care less
she wants to ask you if you care
but your answer could be too much for her to bare

She doesn't want you to feel bad
especially for her, it just makes her mad
she blames herself for everything
even though she didn't do anything

She's stronger than you think
but when she sees you, it makes her heart sink
and when you look VERY closely
you'll see ~That Girl~ is me



Kelseigh, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 1 poem for each one you submit.





Copyright © Kelseigh ... [ 2012-06-11 05:52:29]
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Re: ~That Girl~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Rylo on Saturday, 27th October 2012 @ 07:55:09 PM AEST
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Awesome poem I have been in your shoes many times. I was just in this same situation not long ago, but time will heal and friends can help. Sometimes it's best to just read or find something awesome to do to keep your mind off of things. I myself I write when I am down, and it's when some of my best work shows.




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