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Array ( [sid] => 172809 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Rainy Experience [time] => 2012-06-04 06:27:44 [hometext] => Its about a person seeing two love birds meeting. [bodytext] => The day was hectic.
The evening was pathetic.
To add the misery there was rain with thunder.
Above that there was no bus running under.

So I was left with no other option
Than to walk in the rain without any companion.
I was cursing every moment with each step.

Then I saw something unforgetable.

From one side of the muddy road
A boy was standing with his mind abroad.
He was lost somewhere.
He neither mind the rain nor the mud everywhere.

I followed his eyes.
They took me to the other side.
There a beautiful girl was standing.
A bit mature and a bit childish.

The boy came close to her.
The girl came close to him.
Neither he nor she said anything.

But their faces were saying everything.

They were complaining.
"What made you to leave me?"

They were apolozising.
"Sorry dear, circumstances took me away."

They were making promises.
"You are my future."

They were giving warnings.
"If again you desert me
Than you will take away two things from me
My life and my breath."

Oh! Am I seeing the tears.
As they are difficult to make because of the rain.

At that moment I forgot
My stomach was struggling for food.
My eyes were dying to get some sleep.
My whole body was not able to bear the rain

But eyes of my heart wanted to see
Those doves of love.

The boy came little more closer.
He took his life in his arms.
And then he looked up and thanked God.
I think it was for the rain.
Which made him to forget the eternal pain. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 109 [topic] => 2 [informant] => artist [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
A Rainy Experience

Contributed by artist on Monday, 4th June 2012 @ 06:27:44 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



The day was hectic.
The evening was pathetic.
To add the misery there was rain with thunder.
Above that there was no bus running under.

So I was left with no other option
Than to walk in the rain without any companion.
I was cursing every moment with each step.

Then I saw something unforgetable.

From one side of the muddy road
A boy was standing with his mind abroad.
He was lost somewhere.
He neither mind the rain nor the mud everywhere.

I followed his eyes.
They took me to the other side.
There a beautiful girl was standing.
A bit mature and a bit childish.

The boy came close to her.
The girl came close to him.
Neither he nor she said anything.

But their faces were saying everything.

They were complaining.
"What made you to leave me?"

They were apolozising.
"Sorry dear, circumstances took me away."

They were making promises.
"You are my future."

They were giving warnings.
"If again you desert me
Than you will take away two things from me
My life and my breath."

Oh! Am I seeing the tears.
As they are difficult to make because of the rain.

At that moment I forgot
My stomach was struggling for food.
My eyes were dying to get some sleep.
My whole body was not able to bear the rain

But eyes of my heart wanted to see
Those doves of love.

The boy came little more closer.
He took his life in his arms.
And then he looked up and thanked God.
I think it was for the rain.
Which made him to forget the eternal pain.




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Re: A Rainy Experience (User Rating: 1 )
by Elia on Monday, 4th June 2012 @ 07:19:38 AM AEST
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wow I really love this. You did a fantastic job capturing the emotion and experience of the .


Re: A Rainy Experience (User Rating: 1 )
by gypsymaddness on Monday, 4th June 2012 @ 06:19:37 PM AEST
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If I had to stop in the middle of this poem for any reason, if I couldn't be able to finish the rest of this poem, I would be devestated. There you have it. This poem is that great. Thank you for sharing it with us. Great wishes. :-)




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