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Array ( [sid] => 17278 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Wonder.... [time] => 2003-05-09 04:05:00 [hometext] => It is about hiding my feelings and how my friends and family may never ever be able to help me recover from my depression to see those feelings show ever again. I wrote this after my brother passed on in 2000, since then I have a friend who has helped me cope with my brother's death and has been the only one able to bring out those feelings in me. I care for him with all my heart for it because he was there for me more than my own family was and he makes me happy. [bodytext] => The thoughts that you had given me
had never crossed my mind
The love and trust you seek from me
you may never ever find

Can anybody hear my voice?
Does anybody care?
Does anyone know that I stand alone
and know why life's not fair?

My trust is ever dwindling
To me, it will not go.
Will I ever get it back?
The world may never know.

Now I go back to the beinning,
because the beginning may be the end
I tell you all these wonderous words
in hopes that you are my friend.

The thoughts that you had given me
had never crossed my mind.
The love and trust you seek from me
you may never ever find.







[comments] => 3 [counter] => 145 [topic] => 43 [informant] => GroverGirl18 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Wonder....

Contributed by GroverGirl18 on Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



The thoughts that you had given me
had never crossed my mind
The love and trust you seek from me
you may never ever find

Can anybody hear my voice?
Does anybody care?
Does anyone know that I stand alone
and know why life's not fair?

My trust is ever dwindling
To me, it will not go.
Will I ever get it back?
The world may never know.

Now I go back to the beinning,
because the beginning may be the end
I tell you all these wonderous words
in hopes that you are my friend.

The thoughts that you had given me
had never crossed my mind.
The love and trust you seek from me
you may never ever find.











Copyright © GroverGirl18 ... [ 2003-05-09 04:05:00]
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Re: Wonder.... (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 11:02:02 AM AEST
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AAHH Gave me tears so sorry for your loss!
This was so sad but well done! Christina


Re: Wonder.... (User Rating: 1 )
by starshine on Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 11:39:06 AM AEST
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Hi-
So sorry about your Brother. Perhaps your family was so enveloped in their personal grief, they didn't have the strength to give you the support you so deserved.
The friend that has helped you through this darkened time will share this bond with you forever!
The Best! ;)


Re: Wonder.... (User Rating: 1 )
by moses on Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 08:42:48 PM AEST
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defintly feelin ur pain, sry for ur loss....keep up the good work, good poem.




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