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Array ( [sid] => 17271 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => prom [time] => 2003-05-09 01:25:00 [hometext] => 2 poems in 1, maybe 3 if you count the prelude, the prelude is like this prayer saying....whatever, then the next part is 2 poems entertwined about what would happen if this guy gets to go to prom with this chick and the other entertwined part is what hes doing cuz hes not on the date with her

enjoy [bodytext] => (prelude)

the stars shine bright tonight
tonight will be perfect
everything will go right
nothing will go wrong,
afterall its our prom
if just tonight i could call you mine
i could die tomorrow and be happy with my time......


--



ill pick you up at 8, i wont be late

-but not tonight, i dont have a date

we'll take a limo, eat out and have fun

-TV and a bottle of coke, pizza for one

we'll take our picture and go to the afterparty

-party of one, half a bottle of bocardi

Ill get you home and not too late

-wake up at noon with a hangover, no second first date [comments] => 2 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 43 [informant] => wil_ca [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
prom

Contributed by wil_ca on Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 01:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



(prelude)

the stars shine bright tonight
tonight will be perfect
everything will go right
nothing will go wrong,
afterall its our prom
if just tonight i could call you mine
i could die tomorrow and be happy with my time......


--



ill pick you up at 8, i wont be late

-but not tonight, i dont have a date

we'll take a limo, eat out and have fun

-TV and a bottle of coke, pizza for one

we'll take our picture and go to the afterparty

-party of one, half a bottle of bocardi

Ill get you home and not too late

-wake up at noon with a hangover, no second first date




Copyright © wil_ca ... [ 2003-05-09 01:25:00]
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Re: prom (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 09:26:18 PM AEST
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hey hon! its me! surprised 2 hear from me? lol..well hope u can figure who this is ...i juss wanted to say tha i really like tha poem..n of course....all of whatever uve written, is great. Theres hardly no such thing as a bad poem thats ever come from u....which is good lol. Youre the sweetest, i gotta admit, and hope I get 2 chill wif u for real someday.....and..somehow..:- *sigh*...Ill let u go..and dont ever change. I love u for who u r. Miss tlakin2 u hoN! Hope we can be tight like this...for a longer period of time, unlike wut we had last yr or whatever, pfft..lol You take care! xoxox Ciao!-aLLy (there u go..i said my name :-P )
P.S.-u ARE cute...:-D


Re: prom (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 01:42:33 AM AEST
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I Like This Peom




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