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Array ( [sid] => 172654 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Would you, God… [time] => 2012-05-25 06:21:56 [hometext] => [bodytext] => O God, would you be alive, do you exist
Show me some sign that I may know you
Would you be my absent father, or even,
My mother who cant seem to know me

Do I please you, tell me how
Show me how to get you to look at me
I cant seem to know how to live
Can you show me please, could you help me now

Yesterday I had them tear me to shreds
Love and Surprise both looked at me hard
Their voices were strangers’, not those I raised
And now I am back to being the orphan I was

Can you take me away, I cant seem to fit in
Would there be a place for me with you
Who fills up your heaven, would they have me
May I come in God, or would you have me orphaned too…
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Would you, God…

Contributed by Sasha on Friday, 25th May 2012 @ 06:21:56 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

O God, would you be alive, do you exist
Show me some sign that I may know you
Would you be my absent father, or even,
My mother who cant seem to know me

Do I please you, tell me how
Show me how to get you to look at me
I cant seem to know how to live
Can you show me please, could you help me now

Yesterday I had them tear me to shreds
Love and Surprise both looked at me hard
Their voices were strangers’, not those I raised
And now I am back to being the orphan I was

Can you take me away, I cant seem to fit in
Would there be a place for me with you
Who fills up your heaven, would they have me
May I come in God, or would you have me orphaned too…

Copyright Â© Sasha ... [ 2012-05-25 06:21:56]
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Re: Would you, God… (User Rating: 1 )
by thehotshotpoet on Friday, 25th May 2012 @ 08:43:19 AM AEST
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your poem is beautiful & very inspirng to me,please let me also say to you,there is a place on this earth for you as well as me or anyone,you just gotta keep looking,don't give up it's out there waiting for you.
thanks for sharing
the hot shot poet

Re: Would you, God… (User Rating: 1 )
by poewhit on Friday, 25th May 2012 @ 10:59:33 AM AEST
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Prayer is the way to God. Though God will find you in his good time - FAITH

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