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[sid] => 172605
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[aid] => mick
[title] => My heart in words
[time] => 2012-05-21 20:35:53
[hometext] => I wrote this poem to get over a break up with a 3 year long relationship please tell me what you think i could improve on my poetry writing
[bodytext] => Will I ever find someone just for me Someone to have and hold inside my heart Someone to lean on me as on a tree Someone to give my life a fresh new start A girl as sweet as a fresh apple pie A girl with a smile as bright as the sun A girl who to my face will never lie A girl who is kind and is very fun But I know I will never find her I have passed up the chance to find the girl Thus leaving me in a state of torture Twas my fault that these events unfurled I look at couples and I wonder why Why I'm on the ground when they're in the sky [comments] => 3 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 22 [informant] => clarinetguy123 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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