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Array ( [sid] => 172532 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => my little brother [time] => 2012-05-16 14:19:31 [hometext] => this really happened today and it got me thinking so i just wrote it down. [bodytext] => my brother's home from school
and he's had a long day
he comes downstairs and hugs me
and says never go away
here i am 17 and he is ten years younger
when he says he loves me
im glad he is my brother.
i only wish he understood
the hell that im put through
when he breaks my heart like this
the love is sincerely true
there really is no better feeling
of love in a child's heart
especially when it's directed to you
right from the very start
and so i made a promise
in which i intend to keep
that no matter where life takes me
this love will always run deep.
i could not leave him if i tried
for he is truly loved
i do not know if there is evil
but definitely good above.
this child is and always was
my unbirthed little boy
he's my beautiful little brother
and his name is Austin Roy.

baby jewelz
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my little brother

Contributed by BabyJewels94 on Wednesday, 16th May 2012 @ 02:19:31 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

my brother's home from school
and he's had a long day
he comes downstairs and hugs me
and says never go away
here i am 17 and he is ten years younger
when he says he loves me
im glad he is my brother.
i only wish he understood
the hell that im put through
when he breaks my heart like this
the love is sincerely true
there really is no better feeling
of love in a child's heart
especially when it's directed to you
right from the very start
and so i made a promise
in which i intend to keep
that no matter where life takes me
this love will always run deep.
i could not leave him if i tried
for he is truly loved
i do not know if there is evil
but definitely good above.
this child is and always was
my unbirthed little boy
he's my beautiful little brother
and his name is Austin Roy.

baby jewelz

Copyright © BabyJewels94 ... [ 2012-05-16 14:19:31]
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Re: my little brother (User Rating: 1 )
by workinprogress on Wednesday, 16th May 2012 @ 02:22:03 PM AEST
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Truly beautiful and so pure! Thank you for sharing!

Re: my little brother (User Rating: 1 )
by thehotshotpoet on Wednesday, 16th May 2012 @ 04:21:53 PM AEST
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you know beautiful writing like this will take you far in life honey this is beautiful, I love you baby
your dad
the hot shot poet

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