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ultimately causing me to evolve into levels of stress

That I have not met or strive to connect.

Trying to compete with the elemental nature of destiny

Who has such success at making me feel indubitably blessed

To be a part of such a terrific mess

Then turns around stabs me in the chest

With no regret. Myself watching the blood drip to the floor,

In sync with my heartbeat that beats for the one I adore.

Shining brown eyes piercing into soul.

Reviving me as it kills me. Trying to condemn me.

But still I rise.
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Pointless Persistance

Contributed by braq14 on Wednesday, 16th May 2012 @ 11:28:14 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

To the girl that I continually try to impress, caress and test,

ultimately causing me to evolve into levels of stress

That I have not met or strive to connect.

Trying to compete with the elemental nature of destiny

Who has such success at making me feel indubitably blessed

To be a part of such a terrific mess

Then turns around stabs me in the chest

With no regret. Myself watching the blood drip to the floor,

In sync with my heartbeat that beats for the one I adore.

Shining brown eyes piercing into soul.

Reviving me as it kills me. Trying to condemn me.

But still I rise.

Copyright © braq14 ... [ 2012-05-16 11:28:14]
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Re: Pointless Persistance (User Rating: 1 )
by Soccerflyer27 on Wednesday, 16th May 2012 @ 01:39:07 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this poem (strictly in a relatable way). She doesn't know what she's missing! Well written. Keep writing! :)

Re: Pointless Persistance (User Rating: 1 )
by BabyJewels94 on Wednesday, 16th May 2012 @ 01:40:16 PM AEST
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very beautiful, i actually felt your persistence as i read and I'm not a professional but this was a terrific write.

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