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Array ( [sid] => 172523 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A poetry challenge for poetryis life,can you handle it?? [time] => 2012-05-16 11:17:10 [hometext] => hey poetryislife here is where it starts,reply to this & I will continue to reply to whatever you may write.good luck your gonna need it [bodytext] =>
take my challenge
but please beware
the challenge I offer
is so not fair

for 34 years
I've created these rhymes
about love & laughter
& many hard times

but you've agreed to this challenge
& I wish you well
so do your best
& give it hell

with my poems
I do like to play
when it comes to a challenge
here's what I will say

I stand the test
as time will pass
of creating the words
I know will last

defeat if you can
the words that I write
try very hard
with all of your might

make it understandable
so all can see
the pride in your work
the dignity

you insulted my work
but yet you cannot defeat
the words are here
& so discreet

you say that your better
then come on & show it
I'm just getting warmed up
I'm the hot shot poet

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 116 [topic] => 75 [informant] => thehotshotpoet [notes] => I suggest you read the "heads up" on your poem "way back when". Thank you, Moderator_18 May 16, 2012 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

A poetry challenge for poetryis life,can you handle it??

Contributed by thehotshotpoet on Wednesday, 16th May 2012 @ 11:17:10 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

take my challenge
but please beware
the challenge I offer
is so not fair

for 34 years
I've created these rhymes
about love & laughter
& many hard times

but you've agreed to this challenge
& I wish you well
so do your best
& give it hell

with my poems
I do like to play
when it comes to a challenge
here's what I will say

I stand the test
as time will pass
of creating the words
I know will last

defeat if you can
the words that I write
try very hard
with all of your might

make it understandable
so all can see
the pride in your work
the dignity

you insulted my work
but yet you cannot defeat
the words are here
& so discreet

you say that your better
then come on & show it
I'm just getting warmed up
I'm the hot shot poet

Copyright © thehotshotpoet ... [ 2012-05-16 11:17:10]
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Re: A poetry challenge for poetryis life,can you handle it?? (User Rating: 1 )
by gypsymaddness on Wednesday, 16th May 2012 @ 03:29:33 PM AEST
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Hmm. Well, you made me interested. Is this a real challenge? Because if it is, then I'll take it, and you can comment on my poems. Go ahead. I'll even thank you for the negative comments. You did, after all, comment on one of my first poem here, and that made me better. You are not afraid to write down your opinions. Great :-) This poem, here, is really good. I like the end to it. Stylish :-)

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