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Array ( [sid] => 172517 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Now let me clear my throat [time] => 2012-05-15 23:25:33 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Do they understand the damage you caused?

Trying to reverse what your evil ways has done.

Not trying to change me?

Fell down a cliff?

Sherlock Holmes.

Figure it out.

It is stuck in my throat.

I have to cough.

Did you hear me?

I will cough again.

Get it out.

Out.

Now is the time.

Do you hear me?

NOW

Get it out.

It hurts so much.

I have to cough.

It's almost time.

It has finally come.

My friends will help.

I have to cough.

It is getting thick.

The air is light.

I have to cough.

It's almost out...

VIOLATED

It's getting clear.

ABUSE

My throat feels better.

LIES

The pain is almost gone.

Now where does it want to go? [comments] => 1 [counter] => 95 [topic] => 21 [informant] => workinprogress [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Now let me clear my throat

Contributed by workinprogress on Tuesday, 15th May 2012 @ 11:25:33 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Do they understand the damage you caused?

Trying to reverse what your evil ways has done.

Not trying to change me?

Fell down a cliff?

Sherlock Holmes.

Figure it out.

It is stuck in my throat.

I have to cough.

Did you hear me?

I will cough again.

Get it out.

Out.

Now is the time.

Do you hear me?

NOW

Get it out.

It hurts so much.

I have to cough.

It's almost time.

It has finally come.

My friends will help.

I have to cough.

It is getting thick.

The air is light.

I have to cough.

It's almost out...

VIOLATED

It's getting clear.

ABUSE

My throat feels better.

LIES

The pain is almost gone.

Now where does it want to go?

Copyright © workinprogress ... [ 2012-05-15 23:25:33]
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Re: Now let me clear my throat (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 15th May 2012 @ 11:34:54 PM AEST
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Wow, you definitely got some anger in this one. I liked the style of this and the slightly ambiguous theme. Conjured up a few images there too. Nicely done.

Again, Photobucket

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Tim

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