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Array ( [sid] => 172437 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Perfect Two. [time] => 2012-05-10 10:06:54 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Kick me down, spit in my face
Nothing will stop my everlasting pace
For her id walk till the millionth day
I swear ill always find the way

Because when I see her, nothing compares
Nothing else matters, no worries or cares
Girl, If only you could realise how amazing you are
With just me and you, we could go far

The chills come first when I look in her eyes
Between us, there will never be lies
My best friend in every way
It’s been 10 years since you came to stay

The days we spend, are what makes my life
One day, I hope to make her my wife
The most beautiful girl I have ever laid eyes upon
Since the first time I saw her, I was totally gone

The soft touch of her body next to mine
The feel of her hair, ever so fine
Then the cancer came and took her away
The endless nights full of tears, as we pray

Watching her waste away, it tore at me
The love of my life, heartbreaking to see
If I could have taken the disease for you
It would be me in that bed,
While you spread your wings and flew.

What am I meant to do with my life?
Nothing else makes me happy, but you.
Im alone, with no one to answer my echoing coo
These four walls are all that listen
As every day, more of you seems missin’
I’m down on my knees, praying to god
Is he punishing me from this path I have trod?

So today you pass
You’re in the next class
I feel so b r o k e n apart
With a huge hole,
A hole that used to be a heart
I don’t sleep anymore, just think of you
Without you next to me, I have no clue
Im lost, like a ghost, nothing to do
Together we made,
The perfect two
But your gone without leaving me time to bade,
Bade you a farewell,
I have been left to fade
It’s like going into the fog,
At a slow wade
Immediately lost,
With no helping aid
And every step I will miss having you in my arms
Your hands in my palms
As my heartbeat slows then calms

Every step I take, I’ll remember your face
Without you, I’m vanishing without a trace
Just know wherever you are
I am never far
Because everything I do,
Is always for you
Forever and always,
The perfect two.
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The Perfect Two.

Contributed by Damian on Thursday, 10th May 2012 @ 10:06:54 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief



Kick me down, spit in my face
Nothing will stop my everlasting pace
For her id walk till the millionth day
I swear ill always find the way

Because when I see her, nothing compares
Nothing else matters, no worries or cares
Girl, If only you could realise how amazing you are
With just me and you, we could go far

The chills come first when I look in her eyes
Between us, there will never be lies
My best friend in every way
It’s been 10 years since you came to stay

The days we spend, are what makes my life
One day, I hope to make her my wife
The most beautiful girl I have ever laid eyes upon
Since the first time I saw her, I was totally gone

The soft touch of her body next to mine
The feel of her hair, ever so fine
Then the cancer came and took her away
The endless nights full of tears, as we pray

Watching her waste away, it tore at me
The love of my life, heartbreaking to see
If I could have taken the disease for you
It would be me in that bed,
While you spread your wings and flew.

What am I meant to do with my life?
Nothing else makes me happy, but you.
Im alone, with no one to answer my echoing coo
These four walls are all that listen
As every day, more of you seems missin’
I’m down on my knees, praying to god
Is he punishing me from this path I have trod?

So today you pass
You’re in the next class
I feel so b r o k e n apart
With a huge hole,
A hole that used to be a heart
I don’t sleep anymore, just think of you
Without you next to me, I have no clue
Im lost, like a ghost, nothing to do
Together we made,
The perfect two
But your gone without leaving me time to bade,
Bade you a farewell,
I have been left to fade
It’s like going into the fog,
At a slow wade
Immediately lost,
With no helping aid
And every step I will miss having you in my arms
Your hands in my palms
As my heartbeat slows then calms

Every step I take, I’ll remember your face
Without you, I’m vanishing without a trace
Just know wherever you are
I am never far
Because everything I do,
Is always for you
Forever and always,
The perfect two.




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by thehotshotpoet on Thursday, 10th May 2012 @ 10:28:41 AM AEST
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very inspiring thanks for sharing
the hot shot poet




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