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[aid] => mick
[title] => Alone in a crowded maze
[time] => 2012-05-08 09:26:14
[hometext] => This is a poem about how I used to be stubborn and never ask for help in anything I do. This is me coming to the realization that we all need help and we all must help each other at times
[bodytext] => As I yawn on the longest day I awake at the center of a crowded maze. As people walk by me I become bewildered and started to look down a path in a daze. To make an executive decision I first went left only to realize it was just an unintelligent phase. I suddenly stopped, turned right, and then gave myself much praise. As I kept exploring I became Saddened because I saw walls blocking many of the simple ways. At this point I am having soliloquy responding “will this be the end of days”. Now with much frustration I decided to return to the commencement of it all, and that is the center of the maze. This time around I come prepared with an inquiry that certainly needed to be raised. Walking towards a human I started to Say. “Excuse me kind sir may I ask you a question if I may. Surprisingly the mortal did not say nay. There was also not a price I needed to pay. I thought to myself “I here will not lay”. The knowledge of this fellow was a massive array. “O Yes all you have to do is turn right, then turn left, and then go that way!” This is the wisdom of the clever Mr. Hays. Now that I have the answer I will run out and dash to the exit fast as a blaze. Finally with much needed assist I am out of the maze! I of course one day will return to answer a question needed to be raised. To give the solution to a loner in a crowded maze. [comments] => 0 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 73 [informant] => JOSEJAD [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )
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