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Array ( [sid] => 172389 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => To The Next One. [time] => 2012-05-07 13:12:23 [hometext] => A poem written to try and create an inspirational message saying never give up on what you want, and if you try hard enough you will get where you so desperately want to be. [bodytext] => To the man who shouted, but was not heard.
To the woman, that was told no, but was not deterred.
To man who defied life and still lived to tell the tale.
To the woman who was left behind, but still was to prevail.
Breathing is easy for one man, but is a mountain to another.
The little kid who watched a scary film, only to hide under the cover.
To the death man who could listen to a nation.
To the women who missed her train, but still waited at the station.
To the candle that lit up the world, with one flame.
To the man who walked around naked without any shame.
Some run, some jump, some hide.
Whatever you do, do with pride.
The stars are all the vindication you need.
To not live a life, full of greed. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 19 [informant] => bryantjunior [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )
To The Next One.

Contributed by bryantjunior on Monday, 7th May 2012 @ 01:12:23 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems



To the man who shouted, but was not heard.
To the woman, that was told no, but was not deterred.
To man who defied life and still lived to tell the tale.
To the woman who was left behind, but still was to prevail.
Breathing is easy for one man, but is a mountain to another.
The little kid who watched a scary film, only to hide under the cover.
To the death man who could listen to a nation.
To the women who missed her train, but still waited at the station.
To the candle that lit up the world, with one flame.
To the man who walked around naked without any shame.
Some run, some jump, some hide.
Whatever you do, do with pride.
The stars are all the vindication you need.
To not live a life, full of greed.




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Re: To The Next One. (User Rating: 1 )
by dvtpdw on Monday, 7th May 2012 @ 01:34:06 PM AEST
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Such strong words of hope and the future. I really liked this. Your words grabbed me and didn't let go. Great write. Thank you for sharing.


Re: To The Next One. (User Rating: 1 )
by Lide on Monday, 7th May 2012 @ 01:42:33 PM AEST
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i especially love this sentence " To the candle that lit up the world, with one flame." it has so much meaning to it and i guest it represents that little light in the world i.e hope.


Re: To The Next One. (User Rating: 1 )
by flavellm on Monday, 7th May 2012 @ 04:36:58 PM AEST
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think I might of commented on your other poem too, again outstanding. really powerful inspiring piece. Impressed the hell out of me m8 this one


Re: To The Next One. (User Rating: 1 )
by i_see_herbert on Monday, 7th May 2012 @ 11:00:13 PM AEST
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Did you mean "deaf" man, I would assume? Regardless, I like the poem. I like all the scenarios you played out. If you were looking for inspirational, you hit it spot on.


Re: To The Next One. (User Rating: 1 )
by Kailas on Wednesday, 9th May 2012 @ 02:21:30 PM AEST
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WOW that is all I can say WOW; this poem is really special and can reach everyone's heart. Than You for Sharing! :)




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