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A time we cannot keep
Losing all our hope
The fields are turning white
And the hands are cloaks we worship

If you remembered the hills of faith
You've gone further than the most of us
Here we wait for a turn of fate
We cannot look for an escape
When these walls around us
Hold us to a dream we fake

Look into the atmosphere
We took it in our palms
Caressing our vengeance with the time
We presumed no one would
Discover we had stolen
From the ocean in its
Cataclysmic catacombs
Maybe we would no longer
Have to sip our water
From an awkward cup

You have made me the happiest man
You could have made me
Could you have made me?

Beside the sadly lit virtue candle
I arrange in the cold
Pieces of skin soaked wood
The ocean has heaved me out
The monstrous chamber
I now walk into tomorrow

A man who must tame
The heavens
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An Ocean That Feeds Us With Time

Contributed by Lee on Saturday, 5th May 2012 @ 09:41:30 PM in AEST
Topic: surreal

So it's another time
A time we cannot keep
Losing all our hope
The fields are turning white
And the hands are cloaks we worship

If you remembered the hills of faith
You've gone further than the most of us
Here we wait for a turn of fate
We cannot look for an escape
When these walls around us
Hold us to a dream we fake

Look into the atmosphere
We took it in our palms
Caressing our vengeance with the time
We presumed no one would
Discover we had stolen
From the ocean in its
Cataclysmic catacombs
Maybe we would no longer
Have to sip our water
From an awkward cup

You have made me the happiest man
You could have made me
Could you have made me?

Beside the sadly lit virtue candle
I arrange in the cold
Pieces of skin soaked wood
The ocean has heaved me out
The monstrous chamber
I now walk into tomorrow

A man who must tame
The heavens

Copyright © Lee ... [ 2012-05-05 21:41:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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