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for Jessica (extended)
Contributed by
fallensilence
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Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I realized today that i would not mind standing by the lake
with you as the passive clouds turn rebellious and the drops
of rain seem to drop endlessly from the sky
and we sit comfortably in each others arms for an eternity
until we see the sky clear
and we are still in the same embrace
the warmth feeding each of us as we lie calmly
in each others arms
...as only lovers can
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fallensilence
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2003-05-08 10:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: for Jessica (extended)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Apartment213 on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 05:49:04 PM AEST (User
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i liked these lines alot im gonna go back and read the first part....very good keep it up |
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Re: for Jessica (extended)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Apartment213 on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 05:49:51 PM AEST (User
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i liked these lines alot im gonna go back and read the first part....very good keep it up |
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Re: for Jessica (extended)
(User Rating: 1 ) by tease_whizz on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 05:33:55 AM AEST (User
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like the new additions, you create a really lovely tranquil image. i hope she gets to read this (maybe send it to her anonymously?). good luck in finding your falling star, Kate x |
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