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Array ( [sid] => 172333 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Precious [time] => 2012-05-03 14:58:29 [hometext] => A girl I've known for a long time. We had massive crushes on each other until we split. This is for you precious. [bodytext] => Beauty like yours is not common for me
You're special or one of a kind
A sweet girl like you I'd die to ask
Will you forever be mine?
Soft brownish colored hair
If only I could smell its aromatic scent
How I wish to be with your lovely presence
With all the time I'd spent
Roaming in my mind as a mere seed
You attach to the emptiness of a spot
Filling up with an exciting emotion
Sprouting nothing more than a thought
Talk to me like we use to when we were kids
We smiled and let our laughs free
I still remember that brown sweater you wore
As we walked together just you and me
How I wish to love you again precious
There nothing else I'd wish upon
I fill up with joy imagining such wonder
If only you haven't of gone
We part ways when winter arrived
Words can decide the fate of something so dear
You left me when you said you needed space
If only I knew that would last forever

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 145 [topic] => 22 [informant] => SyntheticH2O [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Precious

Contributed by SyntheticH2O on Thursday, 3rd May 2012 @ 02:58:29 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Beauty like yours is not common for me
You're special or one of a kind
A sweet girl like you I'd die to ask
Will you forever be mine?
Soft brownish colored hair
If only I could smell its aromatic scent
How I wish to be with your lovely presence
With all the time I'd spent
Roaming in my mind as a mere seed
You attach to the emptiness of a spot
Filling up with an exciting emotion
Sprouting nothing more than a thought
Talk to me like we use to when we were kids
We smiled and let our laughs free
I still remember that brown sweater you wore
As we walked together just you and me
How I wish to love you again precious
There nothing else I'd wish upon
I fill up with joy imagining such wonder
If only you haven't of gone
We part ways when winter arrived
Words can decide the fate of something so dear
You left me when you said you needed space
If only I knew that would last forever





Copyright © SyntheticH2O ... [ 2012-05-03 14:58:29]
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Re: Precious (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 4th May 2012 @ 03:25:22 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
A great work of art, if only you had known.
Blessings,
emy


Re: Precious (User Rating: 1 )
by Banjosandwitch on Saturday, 5th May 2012 @ 06:18:45 AM AEST
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i concure say magnifique




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