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Amidst the Stars
Contributed by
Firehark
on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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I visit a turquoise lake.
She curtsies before rocky pinnacles,
harbors the glacier of yesteryear-
reflects the nightly heavens
in her placated hallows.
From the grace of enchantment,
I stand in her vision
painted on waters
amidst the stars.
I will see her in the dawn,
as the splendor of her spirit
mirrors the sky.
Let the ducks roam the shallows
and the elk sip her broth.
I often gaze upon her beauty,
a man mesmerized;
my spirit lured back to her bosom.
I stand in the doorway to heaven.
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Firehark
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2003-05-08 09:05:00]
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Re: Amidst the Stars
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 10:01:43 AM AEST
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absolutely enchanting write....made me want to visit and see for myself the beauty described
Shari |
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Re: Amidst the Stars
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by lilch4ever on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 02:21:46 PM AEST
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| That was good. Lovely write. |
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Re: Amidst the Stars
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by DOCTERKRISITN on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 02:01:28 PM AEST
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that was really good
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Re: Amidst the Stars
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 08:28:48 AM AEST
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| very beautiful:) hugs nessa |
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