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Array ( [sid] => 172288 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Myth of Love [time] => 2012-05-01 18:19:53 [hometext] => folks I was really bored today & this is what I made from it [bodytext] => they say love
is like the driven snow
well I think it's more
like mistletoe
it wraps around
& consumes its place
it continues to grow
in any given space
I've even heard said
of a gravitational pull
I don't know about you
but to me that's bull
the only gravity I know of
holds us on the ground
if it weren't for that
we could all float around
but I do think love is awesome
so many lessons we have learned
from being as lucky as can be
to really getting burned
even I have been there
many times throughout the years
I feel it's the embarrassment
that makes us shed the tears
well also because it's painful
so very deep inside
it can consume your every move
& always messes with your pride
so at least remember this
if your ignoring everything else
no matter what your love life is
always be yourself
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Myth of Love

Contributed by thehotshotpoet on Tuesday, 1st May 2012 @ 06:19:53 PM in AEST
Topic: mythology

they say love
is like the driven snow
well I think it's more
like mistletoe
it wraps around
& consumes its place
it continues to grow
in any given space
I've even heard said
of a gravitational pull
I don't know about you
but to me that's bull
the only gravity I know of
holds us on the ground
if it weren't for that
we could all float around
but I do think love is awesome
so many lessons we have learned
from being as lucky as can be
to really getting burned
even I have been there
many times throughout the years
I feel it's the embarrassment
that makes us shed the tears
well also because it's painful
so very deep inside
it can consume your every move
& always messes with your pride
so at least remember this
if your ignoring everything else
no matter what your love life is
always be yourself
the hot shot poet

Copyright © thehotshotpoet ... [ 2012-05-01 18:19:53]
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Re: Myth of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by ShaeBay on Tuesday, 1st May 2012 @ 06:48:53 PM AEST
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These words hold true to everyday situations
Nicely done,
Shae

Re: Myth of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Poemkid on Tuesday, 1st May 2012 @ 09:01:08 PM AEST
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That was really enjoyable to read, your message is so true.

-PK

Re: Myth of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by cordier on Tuesday, 22nd May 2012 @ 11:08:14 PM AEST
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I really love your poem. so so true and also so enjoyable to read. :)

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